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Published: 2003-11-05 20:40:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 59; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 19
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Description Memories

I wake up in the morning and I brush my teeth
In the mirror I see your eyes loking back into mine
longingly.

I sit at my couch, drinking coffee and I see you
sitting next to me.. laughing at our memories of the
coffee table.

I go to lunch, and I pass the mall, remembering
Christmas, and I go to a reteraunt, and I remember our
times there.

I visit my friends, and I remember proudly introducing
you as my friend, and my love.

I go and have some coffee, and I remember your
patients.

I return home feeling down, alone, and self-pittiful.
Later that night, I lay in bed remembering the first
time we expressed our love... and the last.

These are my days now that I am without you.
Bitter/sweet memories and feelings of joy and
happiness, sorrow and remorse.

I am constantly haunted with joy and pain, love and
hate.

Do I wish these memories away?
Yes.
Do I wish these memories to stay?
Yes.

What do I wish?
Another go at it.
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Comments: 14

Bundlebee [2003-11-06 05:15:34 +0000 UTC]

Awh man thats sad, well expressed though.

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thewhtnight In reply to Bundlebee [2003-11-06 05:18:41 +0000 UTC]

yea... but believe it or not, it really, really helped. thank you though

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Bundlebee In reply to thewhtnight [2003-11-06 05:24:10 +0000 UTC]

Thats good! Brilliant! so it is true... wrighting it all down may work huh.. pitty i'd need a freaking forrest to do that, but glad it has helped

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thewhtnight In reply to Bundlebee [2003-11-07 01:56:21 +0000 UTC]

hehe, i feel ya there.

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what-the [2003-11-06 01:25:50 +0000 UTC]

excellent poem dj, gee, that's exactly how my days go...

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thewhtnight In reply to what-the [2003-11-06 05:19:48 +0000 UTC]

thx man... and just keep your eyes open, stuff will start to come into focus. Just give it time

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what-the In reply to thewhtnight [2003-11-06 05:45:40 +0000 UTC]

yup i know it, you're right, all it takes is T I M E...

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thewhtnight In reply to what-the [2003-11-07 01:56:52 +0000 UTC]

yesyesyes.... just why so slow???

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what-the In reply to thewhtnight [2003-11-07 02:47:31 +0000 UTC]

lol, i don't know either but it still pisses me off!! aarghhh!!!

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thewhtnight In reply to what-the [2003-11-07 04:19:42 +0000 UTC]

welcome to reality my friend

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Jellygraph [2003-11-06 01:19:22 +0000 UTC]

It's very emotional...I can feel how close it is to you. One critique-I think you meant to use patience rather than patients. But good nonetheless.

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thewhtnight In reply to Jellygraph [2003-11-06 05:20:56 +0000 UTC]

hehe, spelling was never a strong point. but thank you though. glad you liked it.

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freebird48 [2003-11-05 20:45:17 +0000 UTC]

Sweet man, another fine piece. I've been there myself.

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thewhtnight In reply to freebird48 [2003-11-05 21:27:33 +0000 UTC]

kewlies, thank you. Im glad to help, and thx for th fav...

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