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Published: 2012-02-15 20:51:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 995; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 9
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Haiku poem and supporting edited image, please don't copy either. thanks.[link] <-- my blog
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Holiday.
Salt spray and blue waves,
Beautiful tranquillity,
Perfect hide-away.
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indeed they are!
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Some things:
1. Your poem so does not fit the picture! You should at least take some effort to match it, especially when you did not even take the picture (so not much effort is put in!)
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I spent about two hours looking for the correct stock image to use... it is one thing to post critism but another to post a hurtful comment... I spent about three and a half hours or so doing this - and for someone to say that no effort has been made is quite offending.
Especially when the haiku was written after the picture to purposefully match it. How it doesn't match you have not explained considering the reference to water (which is clearly on the picture) the beauty of it all (it's a pretty place) and the fact that it's exclusive enough to be able to hide away from the world (also noted due to the lack of people besides the featured model).
If you feel the need to post a negative comment at least be consious of how it may be offending from the tone of your lexis' and note how the artist should be constructive.
I am not offended by critism as long as it is somewhat considerate and constructive. If you don't like something fair enough everyone's taste is different. But don't have the nerve to suggest that someone hasn't put effort into that thing that you dislike. It's quite rude and disrespectful.
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This is beautiful. Are this your pictures that you took yourself?
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No 
I took the the photos for these:
-playing in the snow
-floating
-pretty present
-doggy dreams
-trinket
and my friend took this one although copyright isn't infringed as it's me hahahahahahahaha ^^
-reaching
the rest are from other people's stocks I'm afraid 
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Aw thank you very much ! :')
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