Comments: 24
shaktikannon [2017-05-15 14:29:54 +0000 UTC]
very good draw
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unit1138 [2014-08-09 05:15:08 +0000 UTC]
fav.me/d462zkb
BUSTED!!
eh, it's okay, just not very original.
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orangeglasses2 [2014-05-15 21:21:09 +0000 UTC]
Quite an interesting chapter, which doesn't attach to the main characters.
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Kleptoid [2014-03-08 09:30:51 +0000 UTC]
i just stared for a while o 0 well done
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Dinomaster75 [2014-03-04 02:53:17 +0000 UTC]
Redoing it would be cool. : )
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Hello-Yuuki [2014-03-04 01:28:53 +0000 UTC]
>//w//< i wouldn't mind if you'd redo it.
Don't take me wrong! I don't think there is anything wrong with other drawing! I just love your art!! ^-^ So the more the better. *i greedy*
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Tiferion [2014-03-03 14:48:58 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. I like the outfit she got this time, as opposed to the dress from the first time. While I was eager to see the story continue, I am enjoying the remakes. Keep up the good work.
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mjlaub [2014-03-01 19:11:31 +0000 UTC]
Id like to see it redone
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Silverfist88 [2014-03-01 15:06:33 +0000 UTC]
You are doing such a good job. I am really impressed.
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heavyarms55 [2014-02-28 19:57:55 +0000 UTC]
You're shown remarkable improvement! You should be very proud!
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Laser-Wing [2014-02-28 15:41:22 +0000 UTC]
"would you rather me completely redo Rachel's picture (here: fav.me/d5c3ks1 ), or would you rather me completely redo it (like I've been doing with the other chapters?"
Is this question just about the picture or about the chapter as well? I'm a little confused because you're asking if we want you to completely redo it or completely redo it.
Honestly, I think the current picture is alright. The shading on the couch is totally off, but otherwise I don't see a big problem. You have to know whether you want this picture to sit along the improved images. It's like no one requested that you rewrite Midas Touch.
And yeah, I would also like to know if there is a particular reason why you changed her appearance. It's not really important, but I'm curious.
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TheXtra89 In reply to Laser-Wing [2014-03-01 04:46:01 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I meant to say redo the color or completely redo the picture. I think I'll just recolor it. As for the change for this picture, not really a huge reason; it just seemed to look better to go a bit more casual.
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alexwarlorn [2014-02-28 09:48:43 +0000 UTC]
Any reason you changed it from violet to pink? And why you made it a jacket and skirt instead of the one piece dress?
BTW: I wonder if the fact the two swim suit girls were changed at the same time (besides the fact they were friends before) effected their changed.
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TheXtra89 In reply to alexwarlorn [2014-03-01 03:47:12 +0000 UTC]
The hair color change was more to fit the story description (also it's a bit easier to show detail with the lighter color). I wanted to change up the clothing a bit; not a huge reason. Also, I did try to draw her with a dress, but it didn't quite turn out right.
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093102748771302 [2014-02-28 06:19:37 +0000 UTC]
your anatomy is getting better. next to improve on is the folds in clothes
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Musetry [2014-02-28 06:05:35 +0000 UTC]
The improvement is so. very. AWESOME. ^^
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glennj26 [2014-02-28 05:37:40 +0000 UTC]
yes very good
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coredumperror [2014-02-28 05:28:29 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous! You've improved quite a lot!
Also, I noticed that the link in the description is broken. It looks like it's treating the parantheses after the URL as part of the link.
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Vyctorian [2014-02-28 05:23:09 +0000 UTC]
Lovely shading!~
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