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Titanium-Alex [2013-01-11 17:20:36 +0000 UTC]
This is...pure amazing. It gave me tingles down my spine & goosebumps - I don't know how you can share such close-to-your-heart things here on dA, but this is a Daily Deviation well deserved, and I'm not at all sorry I saw it.
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reflectionsinwater [2012-12-31 02:59:27 +0000 UTC]
I think this is beautiful. It's full of beautiful and passionate imagery about nature. Do you mind I ask... Is this about the seasons in any way? Its really beautiful, I think you could expand on the dance imagery even more as well as the motif of light throughout the poem.
Hues of ruby scintillate from apple trees.
Butterflies like careless gypsies dance
Through wind carrying the chorus of millions' jubilee.
Just perfect. Splendid.
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tommyboywood [2012-12-31 02:19:12 +0000 UTC]
absolutely beautiful
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MozartsNemesis [2012-12-30 23:16:40 +0000 UTC]
This is lovely. I love nature as well, so this speaks to me in so many ways.. just awesome. I feel like this form would be very challenging for me personally..and you did a great job with it.
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