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thrushwing12 — A Thrush's Journey-Chapter 1
Published: 2013-05-29 19:57:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 266; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Thrushkit yawned, jaws spreading wide. Flamekit growled softly, tail lashing. Thrushkit moved, as quick as a snake and got up in her sister's face. "What?" She hissed, "You hate yawning?"

Flamekit smiled, backing away. "No. I was celebrating how you can't go outside because you are black-furred." She raced away, outside the nursery to play around.

Thrushkit sighed, looking up to see a dark ginger she cat walk over to her. "Do you believe in the curse?" The small kit said, almost pleading to her mother Emberflame.

Emberflame narrowed her eyes. "You mean the black-fur to be evil curse?" She spat, "Am I not supposed to?"

The small black-furred kit snarled, her fur rising, icy blue eyes blazing. "What did you say?! You believe in that stupid thing?! Act like a mother for once!" Thrushkit was flat out furious.

Her mother swatted Thrushkit in the head, making her stumble. Emberflame dug her claws into the nursery floor. She hissed, the sun from outside the nursery coming in, shining on Emberflame's ginger fur, almost making her look on fire.

Thrushkit suddenly got scared. This will not end well.

"YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO TALK TO ME LIKE THAT. DON'T EVER, EVER SAY THAT AGAIN." Emberflame padded out of the nursery, her ginger fur fuzzed up like a bear.

Thrushkit looked down. I should have never said that...but it is true.

The pale black she cat sniffed the air gently. She smiled, her icy blue eyes glowing in the dark. Thrushkit padded over to the corner of the nursery, walking past Silvertail, a tabby queen. She shied away, also scared of the curse. She was the mother of seven kits, all of them outside except one, as far as Thrushkit's nose could tell.

Thrushkit sat in the corner and sighed. "Why aren't you like your brother and sisters?" She softly mewed in the dark.

Amber eyes flashed, and a dark gray tabby came out of the shadows. "Because I don't like the Warrior Code. It's stupid. Why don't we live on ourselves, Thrushkit? Why?"

Thrushkit glanced away. This conversation again.

"Creekkit, you have to understand that life isn't fair. Your talking to a she cat who is black-furred and is 'cursed'."

Creekkit sighed, and looked into Thrushkit's eyes. "Thanks Thrushkit. At least you try." He rubbed muzzles against Thrushkit, the she cat hardly flinching. Creekkit padded outside, leaving Thrushkit there.

Thrushkit smiled, watching him leave. At least you try to believe.

The black she cat looked around the nursery, and sighed. Great, Im alone-again.
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Comments: 19

Spottedleaf25 [2013-06-14 00:28:17 +0000 UTC]

i feel so sorry for her.. i made a fan warrior and when i made her she also had black-fur so now i feel sorry for her aswell

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thrushwing12 In reply to Spottedleaf25 [2013-06-14 01:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Thrushkit needs her family...amd trust me,nshe will get them back.

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Spottedleaf25 In reply to thrushwing12 [2013-06-14 10:57:12 +0000 UTC]

Did u think of this curse when u made up your character or it just came along???

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thrushwing12 In reply to Spottedleaf25 [2013-06-14 17:52:37 +0000 UTC]

Sort of came along

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Kurai-Phantom [2013-05-29 22:34:47 +0000 UTC]

I haven't read a Fanfic in a long while, but this one is actually pretty unique..keep it up.

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thrushwing12 In reply to Kurai-Phantom [2013-05-30 14:05:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank yous~

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GirlWithTheNotebook [2013-05-29 20:31:34 +0000 UTC]

What is 'the curse'?

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thrushwing12 In reply to GirlWithTheNotebook [2013-05-30 14:06:48 +0000 UTC]

The curse is basically any black cat is supposed to be evil and will kill and take over the clan and stuff like that.

Kinda understand now?

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GirlWithTheNotebook In reply to thrushwing12 [2013-05-30 14:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.

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thrushwing12 In reply to GirlWithTheNotebook [2013-05-30 14:16:51 +0000 UTC]

How did I develop Thrushkit's character so far? Be honest please....

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GirlWithTheNotebook In reply to thrushwing12 [2013-05-30 14:22:36 +0000 UTC]

Sort of annoyed.. I don't really know much about her character yet, because we're so soon in the book, but I know that she's desperate for love and affection from her mother and siblings and such.
Grr! Why don't the stupid cats understand that they will become evil if you don't show them love and affection?! Grr.... *shreds piece of paper nearby*

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Spottedleaf25 In reply to GirlWithTheNotebook [2013-06-17 19:54:59 +0000 UTC]

IKR

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thrushwing12 In reply to GirlWithTheNotebook [2013-05-30 14:27:01 +0000 UTC]

*shreds whole entire forest*


What do you want the next chapter should be about?

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GirlWithTheNotebook In reply to thrushwing12 [2013-05-30 14:29:31 +0000 UTC]

Not sure...

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thrushwing12 In reply to GirlWithTheNotebook [2013-05-30 14:31:48 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking about either apprentice ceremony or trying to get out of the nursery, and fighting.

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Spottedleaf25 In reply to thrushwing12 [2013-06-14 00:29:16 +0000 UTC]

go with the second one

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thrushwing12 In reply to Spottedleaf25 [2013-06-14 01:45:03 +0000 UTC]

i was thinking that...

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Spottedleaf25 In reply to thrushwing12 [2013-06-14 11:00:13 +0000 UTC]

Ikr it seems a bit more interesting

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thrushwing12 In reply to Spottedleaf25 [2013-06-14 17:52:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeppers

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