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tidus-chan — Trapped in Fate- Rika by-nc-nd

Published: 2007-11-02 23:43:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1327; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 17
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Description Wow. This took FOREVER to finish xD;


But yeah this took like 2 weeks on and off working on itt, I thought i'd never get it done. I hope everyone likes it and as usual, please give critique, and fave if you like it <3~

*EDIT* Fixed Rika's hand and retouched things a little to hopefully make people happier.

Rika is (c) 07th expansion, Studio Deen, and Ryuukishi 07
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Comments: 10

inspiredcreativity [2009-03-15 20:02:23 +0000 UTC]

There is something about the mood created by this piece I like so much.

I like the look of her facial expression, combined with the lovely color palette. I also like the way you did the glass she is holding.

The reason you are having so much trouble with the hand is because the finger next to the thumb just won't naturally sit like that. I tried holding a glass that way and it hurt just trying to get my finger to do that, I couldn't do it. It is because you have her other fingers going straight up. It would work if the other fingers were curled down.

Try it yourself. Maybe that finger needs to come up.

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Ryuusei-san [2008-02-18 12:57:02 +0000 UTC]

I think something is wrong with the hand, but I know it's hard to draw fingers like that. Besides that, it's really cute <3 And awesome colouring.

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AruTamashi [2007-11-03 16:57:48 +0000 UTC]

o-o

VERRRRRRRRY nice.

'Cept for the few anatomy things that everyone's already said..

I love the coloring.. It looks almost like it could have been done in pastels for some reason.

But yes..

VERY GOOD!

Keep up teh good work, Kazu! <3

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chibichi [2007-11-03 00:42:52 +0000 UTC]

KYAAA THIS IS SO AWESOME >0 AND YOU KNOW IT!
The CGing is just super cool :0 You did such a good job on it~! Suuu different from your other works :0

Myuu the only thing i see wrong is what teh other person mentioned xD There's just 2~3 anatomy things I see that you could easily fix :0 but still!

SO GOOD!!!

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tidus-chan In reply to chibichi [2007-11-03 01:30:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot, Chi!~

And I might take your anatomy thing and change it accordingly.. when I have the time xDD

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chibichi In reply to tidus-chan [2007-11-05 04:11:15 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcommeee~!

Myuu, if you want even more help, you should ask sarah ;_; she's better than me xD

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Sakikou [2007-11-03 00:06:43 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful Kazu! <33333333

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tidus-chan In reply to Sakikou [2007-11-03 00:36:54 +0000 UTC]

Thaaaankyou Saki~ <3

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pixelatedtea [2007-11-02 23:45:33 +0000 UTC]

lolol i like it =]

hmm.
critique time XD

the hand is a bit strange, maybe make the fingers longer? "]

and the chin has a bit of a wobbly line.

haha, it's still realllly awesome :]

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tidus-chan In reply to pixelatedtea [2007-11-02 23:49:36 +0000 UTC]

Thankyouu <3 And yeah my friend said the same thing o-o

I dont know, I think the fingers aren't big becuase she has them tucked away.. or something. rofl

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