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Published: 2008-08-08 06:59:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 7168; Favourites: 77; Downloads: 58
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This is my NiGHTS-Journey of Dreams FAN COMIC.All the characters and settings belongs to SEGA Sonic Team.
I did the art work and rewrite the storyline.
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I will upload Prelude and Chapter 1.Thanks to who translated all the pages for me
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Prelude-page2:[link]
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Comments: 15
Maybe that first bubble should say "Do you know" instead. It would sound a lot like the intro to an English movie that way.
Everything else is fine! Your English is good. I love the panel of Will running.
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Amazing!
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♪ ~ When all alone in my sleep, I just go about dreaming. I see myself there, having the same adventure. ~ ♪
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i think, there is two mistakes? and they are mentioned already. so, nice work. ^^
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Yes,and I just fixed it.Thank you!
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I LOVE the firs panel. So lovely! :3
As for grammar, just get rid of the 'to' that's after 'is'. The other mistake has already be mentioned.
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Thank you so much!I fixed the grammar
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Well, maybe "enter a deep sleep" instead of "have"? That's all I can catch.
But that first panel? HAAAAAAAAAUGH amazing detail.
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I'd help, but I'm kinda confused myself.
Looking fabulous.
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