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TikamiHasMoved — Nightshade - An Art trade

Published: 2008-12-30 00:31:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 1223; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 34
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Description FINALLY! My end of an art trade with It took me a really long time! It's her lovely ferret friend, Nightshade!

I had to draw it in colored pencils. I drew it out in pastels and there was such a lack of definition in her fur, that she just looked boring and flat. I hope you don't mind the medium change!

My first attempt at doing this type of furry creature, so please, be kind??

Also, when the image scanned, it decided that it was a good idea to make the image 9 MB. I had to resize it and save it as a JPG, so I'm sorry if it interferes with the quality.
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Here is the lovely reference I was working from!
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Comments: 26

J-Works [2012-05-21 02:26:38 +0000 UTC]

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This is a very charming drawing, and I really like the sentiment. Just a few things I want to note though:

First off, you mentioned wanting to get more definition in the fur, and to be blunt it kind of needs it. Try using some more darks. In the white areas, add some warm grey streaks, get some value in there. Same thing with the brown. It looks like you did this on brown paper, no? Instead of filling the brown fur with a single lighter brown, use the paper color more by just adding high and low lights while keeping the median color the bare paper.

Second, the eyes. The one on the right (Nightshade's left) is great: nice black, excellent glare. The other eye isn't quite up to par. It looks like you tried to work the glare too much and it got kind of muddled. With glare, less is often more. A more defined glare on an eye (hard edges like that on the right) make the eye look wet and reflective, as eyes are. Also, I don't know if ferrets' noses are wet like dogs, but if they are you want to glare there too. In they have dry noses, then your nose looks great e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

Hope it helps!

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TikamiHasMoved In reply to J-Works [2012-05-21 05:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for taking the time to critique my work! I very much appreciate your suggestions. It was on black paper, the scanner just made it look lighter. I'd like to think I've gotten better since this drawing (it was the first one like it I'd done). Thanks again!

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AnimatedWolf [2011-12-10 21:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww, he is soooo adorable!!!!!

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AliceRosette [2010-11-26 18:39:50 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing and adorable

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TikamiHasMoved In reply to AliceRosette [2010-11-27 06:52:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <3

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AliceRosette In reply to TikamiHasMoved [2010-11-27 20:40:31 +0000 UTC]

No problem! Its amazing!

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coockiesandshadow [2009-09-28 20:52:32 +0000 UTC]

One of my fav animals and IT'S SOO CUTE I HAVE TO FAV THIS!

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TikamiHasMoved In reply to coockiesandshadow [2009-09-28 20:55:09 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Well I really appreciate it!

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SweetLittleFilly [2009-08-13 04:45:04 +0000 UTC]

Ugh, this is so incredible.

I wish I could do a trade with someone and actually make it worth it. Dx

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TikamiHasMoved In reply to SweetLittleFilly [2009-08-13 14:50:56 +0000 UTC]

^^ Just take your time with your art and practice practice practice! No one gets good overnight. Besides, I think your artwork is already quite good.

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SweetLittleFilly In reply to TikamiHasMoved [2009-08-13 14:56:01 +0000 UTC]

haha, thanks.
i'll try. C=

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Childofwestwind [2009-01-21 05:52:52 +0000 UTC]

That looks like my little jack! >.<

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Artista650 [2009-01-13 04:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous! The fur is amazing, especially in contrast to the eyes.

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TikamiHasMoved In reply to Artista650 [2009-01-13 04:57:41 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Thank you!

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EC6456 [2009-01-13 04:39:22 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful! Great work!

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TikamiHasMoved In reply to EC6456 [2009-01-13 04:40:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Mimiu78 [2008-12-30 14:10:51 +0000 UTC]

ahh so adorable!! >w<
it seems taht each strand of fur was drawn out, it looks so soft! good job!

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TikamiHasMoved In reply to Mimiu78 [2008-12-31 00:24:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!

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ictitherium [2008-12-30 05:22:07 +0000 UTC]

GAH OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG I LOVE HTIS

Your half is almost done btw o.o lacking some YELLER LOL

<3 OMG THIS IS AMAZING! I love everything about this FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

Also deary, would you mind me sending you the lineart to your icon (since I may color it digitally instead O: ) in the mail? :3 <33333333333

P.S. THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL FERRET EVAH <3

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TikamiHasMoved In reply to ictitherium [2008-12-30 05:34:42 +0000 UTC]

Lolz I R RETARD! I just read your journal entry. I get it now. ^^ I have switched my DevWatch accordingly!!

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TikamiHasMoved In reply to ictitherium [2008-12-30 05:28:14 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad you like it!!!!!! YYAYYYY!!

Thats totally fine! ^^ I'll send you the original, too! Did you switch accounts??? I was so confused I looked it said that you had fav'd it. >_< Mai little brain cannot handle such confusion!!! Lolz!! Just send me a note with your address and I'll note you with mine!!

Thanks!!!!! *HUGZ*

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KittyNoLikeYou [2008-12-30 01:01:51 +0000 UTC]

AWW!!! as cute as can be!!! You did a nice job on the fur ^^,

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TikamiHasMoved In reply to KittyNoLikeYou [2008-12-30 05:22:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad the colored pencils turned out better than the pastels.

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sydneydc [2008-12-30 01:00:01 +0000 UTC]

It is amazing -drool-. I loooooovvveeeeee iiiiiiiittttttttt

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TikamiHasMoved In reply to sydneydc [2008-12-30 05:21:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I hope thinks so too! ^^

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sydneydc In reply to TikamiHasMoved [2008-12-30 05:26:46 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure she will!

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