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J-Works [2012-05-21 02:26:38 +0000 UTC]
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This is a very charming drawing, and I really like the sentiment. Just a few things I want to note though:
First off, you mentioned wanting to get more definition in the fur, and to be blunt it kind of needs it. Try using some more darks. In the white areas, add some warm grey streaks, get some value in there. Same thing with the brown. It looks like you did this on brown paper, no? Instead of filling the brown fur with a single lighter brown, use the paper color more by just adding high and low lights while keeping the median color the bare paper.
Second, the eyes. The one on the right (Nightshade's left) is great: nice black, excellent glare. The other eye isn't quite up to par. It looks like you tried to work the glare too much and it got kind of muddled. With glare, less is often more. A more defined glare on an eye (hard edges like that on the right) make the eye look wet and reflective, as eyes are. Also, I don't know if ferrets' noses are wet like dogs, but if they are you want to glare there too. In they have dry noses, then your nose looks great e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
Hope it helps!
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TikamiHasMoved In reply to J-Works [2012-05-21 05:57:26 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for taking the time to critique my work! I very much appreciate your suggestions. It was on black paper, the scanner just made it look lighter. I'd like to think I've gotten better since this drawing (it was the first one like it I'd done). Thanks again!
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AnimatedWolf [2011-12-10 21:20:40 +0000 UTC]
Awwwww, he is soooo adorable!!!!!
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AliceRosette [2010-11-26 18:39:50 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing and adorable
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coockiesandshadow [2009-09-28 20:52:32 +0000 UTC]
One of my fav animals and IT'S SOO CUTE I HAVE TO FAV THIS!
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SweetLittleFilly [2009-08-13 04:45:04 +0000 UTC]
Ugh, this is so incredible.
I wish I could do a trade with someone and actually make it worth it. Dx
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Childofwestwind [2009-01-21 05:52:52 +0000 UTC]
That looks like my little jack! >.<
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Artista650 [2009-01-13 04:56:54 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous! The fur is amazing, especially in contrast to the eyes.
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EC6456 [2009-01-13 04:39:22 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful! Great work!
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TikamiHasMoved In reply to ictitherium [2008-12-30 05:28:14 +0000 UTC]
I'm so glad you like it!!!!!! YYAYYYY!!
Thats totally fine! ^^ I'll send you the original, too! Did you switch accounts??? I was so confused I looked it said that you had fav'd it. >_< Mai little brain cannot handle such confusion!!! Lolz!! Just send me a note with your address and I'll note you with mine!!
Thanks!!!!! *HUGZ*
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KittyNoLikeYou [2008-12-30 01:01:51 +0000 UTC]
AWW!!! as cute as can be!!! You did a nice job on the fur ^^,
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TikamiHasMoved In reply to KittyNoLikeYou [2008-12-30 05:22:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad the colored pencils turned out better than the pastels.
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sydneydc [2008-12-30 01:00:01 +0000 UTC]
It is amazing -drool-. I loooooovvveeeeee iiiiiiiittttttttt
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