Comments: 141
GoblinQueeen [2006-03-19 22:34:47 +0000 UTC]
Very nice work, very fun and your painting technique is great, such a wonderful sense of the form. There's some nice movement in the hair, very fluid and it feels natural with the rest of the pose as well as having a nice aesthetic. If I absolutely had to offer any suggestions, I would consider changing up the angle on the pose just a little. The subject's right arm just reads a little awkwardly. It's right, it's just a slightly awkward angle and one of the great things about being an artist is having the power to change that, right? Also, and this is mainly a presentation thing, if you had never told me to miss the legs, I wouldn't have. Sometimes as an artist, it's best to just let the piece speak for itself. Afterall, you felt it was complete or you wouldn't have put it up, right? So just let the viewers enjoy it as you have presented it to them I really like how it worked out in the end, even if that wasn't the original intention. The repetition of the 'target' pattern adds a nice graphic element and really ties the whole work together. Thanks so much for sharing this at critique night, I'm glad I had the chance to see it
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object2bdestroyd [2006-03-19 22:24:28 +0000 UTC]
I see that you have cut out the legs, but right now, all you've got is a floating torso. And a lot of empty space. The design elements ( the circles ) seem pretty weak and unessicary and unrelated to the main work. What I suggest is thinking of element that go a long with the police line and make new design elements based on those, You could always have a huge sash of a police line coming forward in space to cut off the view of the legs. You don't need a background, but if you want to add design elements give them as much thought as the main character you have as that will add a lot to the overall peice.
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Achillies875 [2006-03-19 22:19:18 +0000 UTC]
haha! thats original! Good work!
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DeathsFluffyAngel [2006-03-09 23:10:48 +0000 UTC]
i love this!!!!!!!!! its so awesome!
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half-pint9930 In reply to Titanix-Avalon [2006-03-06 23:45:02 +0000 UTC]
you have no chance to survive make your time.
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this is hilarious
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VietBunny5 [2006-03-03 15:08:06 +0000 UTC]
That is very clever...^____^ its soooo amazing!
I love the yellow...>___^
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Gavenbeck [2006-02-26 03:13:17 +0000 UTC]
Very Dynamic! Nice!
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goldfishoevil [2006-02-21 03:17:39 +0000 UTC]
Her hair + the gun = AWESOME.
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