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Published: 2009-05-11 13:15:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 234; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 7
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This Character belongs to [link] her name is Rough, I love her
she is just the cutest thing, I drew her in her normal clothing, I might get to colour it too if I get the chance ^^ P.S, I just realised I forgot her scalf @_@ damn it, sowwy. I didn't even notice! xD
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Cool you posted this the day that my birthday was XD, and itΒ΄s great that they critique your work in the good way, i hope you improve more, also i need to do so ^^U.
anyway good work
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Yesh, I was very happy to have nice critique. I will definitely keep improving, thank you so much ^^
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YouΒ΄re welcome, and letΒ΄s improve to show the world who we are! but i have some exams today so iΒ΄ll be busy today lol
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lol, I agree! ^^ Good luck on the exams xD
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If you were to continue drawing the line from one side of her head to the other side, you'll see that it extends further out past her hair (you have her head spatially incorrect, unless the top of her head's really flat). A way to bypass this is to complete the hair on the back of her head. Or, draw an oval for the head (circle and oval if head is facing not towards the viewer), then draw the hair on.
Even though you have her tilted to her side, her hair should be pulled straight down, not magically pulled to her right.
Her cleavage is a little high up, even for massive breasts. Her left one is larger than her right. Her left upper arm is really short compared to her bottom part. Her knees are too far down for her. The clavicle is a bit high and should be slightly lowered. If you're having trouble on placement of certain parts on your figure (or anatomy in general), you should take a look at Cedarseed's tutorial: [link]
When you don't leave enough room around the figure, you're going to have what looks like a "cramped" environment. There's barely room above her head and her right side. If you were to give her a good bit of space on those areas, you'll have the image looking more visually interesting with less strain on the mind.
Other than that, you have her in a nice pose. You've got her looking cute yet with an attitude (wonderful qualities to have at the same time). Just work on things you have trouble with and you'll see an improvement in your skills
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Thank you! ^^ that's the first piece of honest criticism I have gotten, I will try what you said and I see your points now, thank you.
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