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this is really too long since i uploaded this, this is the first opportunity ive had to scan it, its been framed and hanging in the hallway of my house
i drew this as a anniversary present for my dad
it was done at the same time as [link] (the one for my mom)

anyways
i am REALLY proud of this one
but. . . as always, i criticize my artwork more than anyone i know. . . except maybe he might criticize it more

but, please, do critique this!
i do see the mistakes with the position of the wings, and the feathers on the breast pains me, but other than that, i want to know what else i could do to make it look more realistic

almost forgot, i used the photo [link] for reference, so the credit to the original falcon goes to
. . . And im really sorry, i guess i didn't actually ask if i could do this, so if it causes offence i will take it down

Description
ok
this is really too long since i uploaded this, this is the first opportunity ive had to scan it, its been framed and hanging in the hallway of my house
i drew this as a anniversary present for my dad
it was done at the same time as [link] (the one for my mom)

anyways
i am REALLY proud of this one
but. . . as always, i criticize my artwork more than anyone i know. . . except maybe he might criticize it more

but, please, do critique this!
i do see the mistakes with the position of the wings, and the feathers on the breast pains me, but other than that, i want to know what else i could do to make it look more realistic

almost forgot, i used the photo [link] for reference, so the credit to the original falcon goes to
. . . And im really sorry, i guess i didn't actually ask if i could do this, so if it causes offence i will take it down