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Toriyama-Kino-90 — Fly Away Home Chapter 1
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Description Hiccup sat up with a groan, it had been another restless night.

He had been having the same dream every other day for the past few weeks.

He had dreams of images that he couldn't directly understand. The first was of a large island hidden in the mist and images of black dragons flying around in circles in perfect alignment across their island home and then images of a ship hovering in the distance and flames as the dragons fought unseen figures marched through the mist and then a jet of bluish purple fire usually broke the dream to wake Hiccup up.

Hiccup had only now realized he had just seen something personal from Toothless' past. How he had dreamed about it, Hiccup wasn't entirely sure. All he knew was that the dream was more or less a sign of something Hiccup should have known was on his best friend's mind.
Even if Toothless was a dragon, he wasn't by any means emotionless. Hiccup looked around his bedroom. It was the early morning and Hiccup noticed that his scaly friend was absent from the room. Hiccup sighed as he got up. He needed to talk to Toothless.
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The early morning sun warmed the grass laden hills as the rays struck the trees, creating shadows on the grass that vaguely resembled monsters of some sort. Though these barely had any resemblance to the dragon that was sitting on the hill nearby, his slanted yellow eyes staring out at the water below the cliff he perched on.
The wind rippled through the trees and the black dragon let out a low moan that cast a sorrowful pitch onto the wind. He flicked his tail to the side before his longing eyes tore from their gaze on the land that was beyond the horizon line of the water, hidden by the mist that lingered above it.

"Toothless?"

The dragon turned and let out a playful growl before tackling the approaching gangly form of his rider and friend. "What are you doing way out here, Bud?" The boy asked, rubbing his hand under the dragon's head. The dragon let out a satisfied purr before giving a growl for a response.
Though Hiccup couldn't directly understand what Toothless was saying, he knew a lame answer when he heard one. "Come on, Toothless." Hiccup said in a dubious tone. The dragon let out a grunt and rolled over to indicate that he was done talking and wanted a belly rub.

"Toothless," Hiccup said in a low voice, "I'm not rubbing your belly until you give me a good answer."
Toothless let out an indignant growl. "Nope." Hiccup replied. "I'm not changing my mind."
Finally Toothless let out a soft moan before coming over to his rider's side and placed his head under Hiccup's hand. For a second Hiccup though about moving his hand but then noticed that something was different about the way Toothless was standing and Hiccup remained still.

"Your family's out there, huh?" Hiccup said and Toothless purred an affirmative. After a few minutes of silence Hiccup sighed. He had thought many times about whether or not Toothless still had a family of dragons out there someplace and if they still lived, would they come looking for Toothless? Hiccup feared the day when his best friend would be taken away for reasons Hiccup couldn't and because of his heart, wouldn't, stop. Hiccup already knew what it was like to lose part of his family and he wouldn't let the same thing happen to Toothless. He turned as Toothless prodded Hiccup in the side with his snout.

"Alright, let's go," Hiccup agreed and soon the two were cruising through the clouds, the air and water soaking through Hiccup's rich brown hair and into his tunic.
Hiccup had to make a choice and it wouldn't be long before he had to make it.
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Hiccup continued his long internal debate long into the night, avoiding contact with everyone and managing, despite the pain that kept shooting through his leg, to escape out of sight at every chance he got.

With night falling, Hiccup made his way to the small area where he he'd first met Toothless and sat down on his favorite rock, pulling his knees up to his chest as he thought over his options.
He was sure that Astrid was suspicious since he'd made an effort not to look her in the eye all day long and he knew it was only a matter of time before she brought down the entire forest to find out where he was. Hiccup smiled at the thought, as painfully destructive as it sounded.

After Hiccup had returned from his battle against the Green Death, Astrid had constantly kept an eye on Hiccup, despite his protests that he was fine. She was always there to make sure he didn't do anything too reckless, though in the past year she'd lightened up more since Hiccup had begun to get used to using his metal limb with ease. It still burned on occasion when he walked around too much, but it was much better than the first month after he woke up to find he only had one leg left.
Then there was the other part of Astrid that Hiccup didn't quite understand: her on and off anger and affection drove Hiccup crazy to no end and he wondered what her real feelings were sometimes. She could be yelling at Hiccup and beating the pulp out of him one second and the next second she was patching him up and telling him not to get into trouble again. Hiccup's mouth twitched into a smile. She certainly did know how to make it up to him though. Hiccup never complained when Astrid kissed him. After all, she was good at it.

"And just what are you smiling about?"
Hiccup fell off the rock and landed unceremoniously on his back, his legs flopped over his head. He sat up, rubbing his head, "What was that for?"
Astrid's golden haired head appeared out of the darkness, "That," She said in her usual stern tone,

"Was for ignoring me all day," She crossed over to where Hiccup was and kissed him. "That was for
your cute smile."

"My what?" Hiccup questioned. Astrid waved her hand, indicating that he wouldn't understand. She then sat down next to Hiccup, leaning back with her hands on the ground beside her legs.
"So what's going on? You've been acting strangely all day," Astrid pointed out and Hiccup averted his green eyes for a second before looking out at the lake in front of them.

"It's Toothless," Hiccup said finally. Astrid looked at Hiccup with concern in her eyes, but waited for him to elaborate before she responded. "I think he wants to go home."

"But, Hiccup, we don't even know where Toothless is from," Astrid said and then stopped when she noticed the look in Hiccup's eyes.

"We don't, but Toothless does," Hiccup said in his serious tone. It was the same one that he had used when he had told Astrid he wasn't going to let the other Vikings kill Toothless no matter what it cost Hiccup.

"So what do you plan to do?" Astrid asked. Hiccup shrugged.

"As of right now?" He paused before shaking his head, "I don't know," He said and then looked up at the starry sky. The small dots formed constellations and after digging around Hiccup had found out that one of them was an old formation of a dragon. It certainly didn't look like any of the dragons that Hiccup knew, but then again he didn't know every type of dragon.

"Hiccup," Astrid said slowly, "If you do go to find Toothless' family, you might come back," She looked at him as his own green eyes almost shut out of the pain he felt at the thought he knew they shared, "Alone."
Hiccup abruptly stood up and started away, though not quickly because of his leg, "I've got to go." He said and limped away. Out of respectful for his thoughts and feelings on the subject, Astrid left the small lake area.

Hiccup stood still, staring down at the ground, his eyes scrunched up as he tried to stop the inevitable pain that came as he made his decision. He squared his shoulders after a second and then turned his head to face the small dragon that he had already heard approaching.
"Hey, Bud," Hiccup said, "Ready to go home?" The dragon let out a low purr of affirmation before Hiccup returned his gaze to the dragon installation in the sky.
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Comments: 18

Toriyama-Kino-90 [2010-11-13 21:55:18 +0000 UTC]

Yup, a kids' book series, but I've heard so many good things about it (and I'm a sucker for kids' books).

Woo! Let me know what you think when you're done. I have more work for it on my FFN profile.

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SakuraJBlossom [2010-10-29 02:56:38 +0000 UTC]

I would read carefully through you story and replace some of the "Hiccups" with the word "He"/"his" because constantly using his name is unnecessary, unless you have mentioned more characters than Hiccup in the same paragraph.

Also, there are several places where you can omit some words to make sentences more concise.

Other than that your description is done well. I can visualize the lake and the mountains. You also show the character's relationship well.

~SakuraJ

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Toriyama-Kino-90 In reply to SakuraJBlossom [2010-10-29 03:50:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I noticed that I'd done that when I was posting it on here. I'll go back and clean it up later on. Thanks for the tips, I really do appreciate the feedback.

Thanks again for the feedback!

-Kino ^-^

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SakuraJBlossom In reply to Toriyama-Kino-90 [2010-10-29 03:51:50 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Giving feedback is a habit of mine.

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Toriyama-Kino-90 In reply to SakuraJBlossom [2010-10-29 04:07:49 +0000 UTC]

A good one at that.

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SakuraJBlossom In reply to Toriyama-Kino-90 [2010-11-01 21:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I haven't actually watched How To Train Your Dragon but I do enjoy reading you story.

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Toriyama-Kino-90 In reply to SakuraJBlossom [2010-11-05 02:17:13 +0000 UTC]

You should see it, it's very well done. I really want to read the book series now that I've seen the movie.

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SakuraJBlossom In reply to Toriyama-Kino-90 [2010-11-07 02:31:07 +0000 UTC]

It's a book series? I will check out the movie! It's on my list.

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Toriyama-Kino-90 In reply to SakuraJBlossom [2010-11-14 08:22:54 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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SakuraJBlossom In reply to Toriyama-Kino-90 [2010-11-18 04:30:28 +0000 UTC]

Which movie was I checking out...

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Toriyama-Kino-90 In reply to SakuraJBlossom [2010-11-19 21:19:49 +0000 UTC]

How to Train Your Dragon and the books it's based on as well.

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SakuraJBlossom In reply to Toriyama-Kino-90 [2010-11-22 21:15:35 +0000 UTC]

Yes! Durp... Is the book called the same title?

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Toriyama-Kino-90 In reply to SakuraJBlossom [2010-12-28 08:29:37 +0000 UTC]

Ha, ha. I haven't heard that sound in a while. My friend Tony makes it all the time.

The first book is called "How to Train Your Dragon" and the others are all titled "How to...(something)" and the later ones have different titles. Just look it up under Cressida Cowell (I don't know if I'm spelling her name right- you can just look it up on wiki under "How to Train Your Dragon").

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SakuraJBlossom In reply to Toriyama-Kino-90 [2010-12-31 22:18:46 +0000 UTC]

Okay thanks! I might make that a part of my summer reading list!

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Toriyama-Kino-90 In reply to SakuraJBlossom [2011-03-18 02:40:42 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! I need to read it as well.

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SakuraJBlossom In reply to Toriyama-Kino-90 [2011-03-19 00:35:06 +0000 UTC]

What book were we talking about?

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Toriyama-Kino-90 In reply to SakuraJBlossom [2011-04-27 02:04:59 +0000 UTC]

I forget. Ha, ha. >.<

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SakuraJBlossom In reply to Toriyama-Kino-90 [2011-04-27 04:26:58 +0000 UTC]

It has been a while since we've spoken. Also, I got a poem into my school's literary magazine.

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