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Ciara's Egyptian Nightmare (Continued)Story by Torqual / Text by Rosellafan
The focus of the girl's struggles receded, became less coordinated before her limbs dropped down all together. They responded here and there with varied degrees of twitching, her legs, arms, hands, the tips of her fingers, her chin. Her sandals lay discarded below her feet as they swayed a foot off the ground, gently back and forth, tipped down by gravity, but no longer desperately fighting for that touch down.
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It seems she's lost the fight... That must take some extreme grip!
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He has supernatural strength!
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Well consdering hes alive after 1000 years.,...
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The dream scape - timeless - and your art an enduring addition -
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Oh my god... this is absolutely amazing in every single way! Β The image and the text go perfectly together and I'm definitely having fun imagining myself in her shoes! Β ...er Β nylons I guess since she kicked her shoes off!
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Thanks! Β This had a real shock value at the time. Β A lot of people were upset by her 'death' although I suspected a quiet minority loved it. Β I don't mind doing death scenes as long as they are non gory. Β I don't find the sight of blood or injury to be sensual, though I know some do. But a choking or a poisoning or some kind of death ray that leaves a beautiful character intact can make a powerful image. Β Thing is though, I don't want to lose a valuable character like Ciara. Β She is very much alive. Β So I had to use the old 'it was a dream' get-out. Β
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I can handle some blood, but not too much either, I also don't like a lot of pain or anything too drawn out. Β That's why some of my favorite ways are strangling and necksnaps, fast and clean! Β I love fantasy because I (or any other character) can be killed countless times and each time, it's just a dream! Β Ciara IS a beautiful character though and conveniently reminds me a bit of myself
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Whew! The Mummy from the 1960's "Johnny Quest" always scared the bejesus out of me!
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I loved Johnny quest and that episode scarred me too although it was also one of my favorites.Β Β
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I just googled it and indeed that's a scary mummy.
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This image I like, any chance you can remake it, only with a vampire doing the neck holding?
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Thanks - but no I won't be re-making this one any time soon. You can contact me privately after April and I will be happy to do it for you as a commission though.
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You know what would be a good idea? See the pages of Ciara dead from different view-points, including the mummy's point-of-view. Just a suggestion
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Well, there are already a couple of over-the-shoulder mummy views.
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Hmm, I'll check it out.
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Light sources are fantastic in this one!!
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DAZ Studio has Point Lights - I've used them both for Ciara's lantern and the Mummy's amulet.
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What are the chances of her being mummified?
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Add me to your watchlist and you'll find out soon!
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chill out people, next thing u know she's gonna wake up in the morning,finding out it was just a dream, going to and opening the tomb exactly the same way, discovering exactly the same things inside, and for twist, a pair of pretty golden sandals just like hers are seen lying around in that treasure room...
not that these are gonna happen, my point is, just let the artists express themselves, and what great arts we've witnessed here
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But thanks for everything you've said.
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Nooo....we just got to like her adorable spunkieness!
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I know... but these adorable spunky girls seems to get in so much trouble.
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Holllly shit that text is well-written. Sexyness. And the picture's excellent too.
Hee hee, it's odd seeing the reactions from people who don't read Angel Corps., Perils of Dawn and the like and aren't used to seeing heroines die and then be right back breathing comfortably in the next scene. Culture clash or something.
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Thank you so much for your support. Yes, Perils of Dawn inspired this and of course has the same writer. Rosellafan really has a way with words.
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i think this is a very sexy erotic story.. and lets face it even if there is no escape in fantasy thats exactly what it is "fantasy" it makes the peril oh so much more erotic and exciting... i love it and she looks a lot like me so i am really connecting with it
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Well you need to make yourself a Ciara outfit, find yourself a mummy, then role play and upload the pics to DeviantArt
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You know.. maybe i shall but then where on earth to find that mummy.. Natural History museum here i come
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Can't wait to see that! And the British Museum is where to head...
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Great pics and text. Well done. Enjoying the story very much so far.
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Dont worry the greatest Heroines come around. Nancy Drew loses constantly, but always solves the case. The Woman in Red faced Peril after Peril per adventure, and always came out on top.
Nyoka the Jungle Girl would Give Ciara a run for her money.
So our girl will do fine..........................Once she wakes up hopefully.
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Not giving anything away at this stage but maybe you're right.
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looks ominous for any future exploring she had planned.
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Unless this isn't the end for her.
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every day is a cliffhanger..
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