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Published: 2019-09-24 15:00:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 904; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 2
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Here is the new drawing all by its lonesome. Speedpaint coming soon!Comparison: www.deviantart.com/totalchance…
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You mention in your description tat any kind of feedback is helpful so here we goo
You said in the video that the colours of the background don't really fit, and you're right.
This could be easily fixed if you shift the hue of the background, or if you have colour correction on your program just use that to make the colours warmer.
Bringing the saturation down and brightness a bit up could also help, so the background wouldn't clash with the foreground as much.
Another problem I see with the background is the perspective. The characters are drawn as if the standing in front of them, but the background is more of a top down view. From this angle you'd be able to see the city, maybe some of the lake, but the majority should be a sky.
I have some other criticism, but it's more minor stuff, and I dunno of you wanna hear that.
Anyway as I said on amino, I like this, and the colours still look nice together
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Thank you for the feedback! I'm trying to get better at drawing backgrounds, but I totally forgot I gotta take perspective into account. I'll definitely keep all this in mind in the future.
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