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TothViki — You listen to me when I'm talking to you!!
Published: 2017-05-17 20:12:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 945; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 1
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"Zonic: *grabs her arm* Listen to me! Enough of this idiotic behavior! You two came here to be zone cops, so don't act like that! You can't talk to me like that, you must call me "sir", take it seriously, and-- YOU LISTEN TO ME WHEN I'M TALKING TO YOU! DON'T LOOK AT ZESPIO WITH THAT IDIOTIC SMILE! And I especially don't have time to put some sense into you two! If you don't like anyting, you can go home!Zerci: *sigh* Okay.. Calm down, I get it. We're sorry. Are we okay? *holds up her hand for a high-five*
Zespio: Oh my--
Zonic: .... *deep breath* I'll be at the training arena if you need anything.
Zector: Okay sir. Zander said he's waiting for you there.
Zonic: Great... -.- "
*PERFECT ENGLISH* lol sorry I'm sure it has many grammar mistakes but I hope you understand. .-.
Oh boy, and I planned to translate the whole story to English the next year! Absolutely the worst idea ever... I've been translating these few sentences for a half hour. .-.
Never mind, I hope you like this drawing I made.
As you see, Zerci and Zoney really pissed Zonic out on the first day.
Zerci (I mean Perci) (c) Sega
Zonic (c) Archie
Art (c) Me
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Comments: 32
poor zonic. maybe do some shooting training 8D ! <3
you did amazing job on this i love it! <3
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Ah thank you! ^^ <3 Yeah. XDD
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damn we should do someday a collap doing Zonic in our style 8D
-totaly not fan screaming over your zonic style- <333
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Ah sure!!
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yay! 
but that sounds even better!
maybe you do the sketch and i lineart and color it? idk xD
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Oh okay!
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its fine, i love doing linearts but okay i will color it than!
so we work on one Zonic? im confiused now xD
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Yep. xD
Oh okay, you can do the lineart if you like doing that.
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Zonic will suffer more. :'D
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Zo why are zome of the characterz have z'z in their namez?
XD
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XDD Accordig to the Archie comics everyone's name starts with z in the zone cops' dimension.
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Ikr xDD It's so weird when I'm writing the story and I always have to think of their original names or I confuse them otherwise.
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Oh yeah, I understand that you have trouble with English in your description of this. Is that true or am I off course?
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Yeah I have problem with English. But next year almost all my lessons will be English lessons in my school so I can improve a lot!
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That's good to hear. What language do you mainly speak? C:
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Looks really nice^^
And a great story, and I didn't found any grammer mistakes, but I was also reading it super fast, so maybe overlooked some stuff xD
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