Xashes-cursiveeye [2011-03-08 01:02:35 +0000 UTC]

THIS.

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Talking-Fish [2011-03-07 02:00:03 +0000 UTC]

Well said,
Short poetry can be difficult to express things but You did it well

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cality [2011-02-28 19:43:08 +0000 UTC]

This is a lovely, deeply profound poem, despite its short length. It feels like it could perhaps benefit from some playing around with the structure, but having 'hearts' on its own line is a very good choice indeed.

I love the link to the phrase 'wear your heart on your sleeve'.

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little-adder [2011-02-25 01:58:05 +0000 UTC]

Hearts hidden up sleeves. o_o Words. God, I don't even understand how you can take such small, simple little syllables and turn them into something so beautiful.

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DamagedHomewrecker [2011-02-24 22:51:26 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE OHSOSTARRYEYED she was the first person i started watching and i am a slave to her writing...it achessssss inside of me...shes so real, so tangible, so beautiful, so painful...ughhhhh

but anyway, back to you haha...this is short but real, and i love it

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