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ToxicToothpick In reply to blankityblankblak [2011-06-10 21:28:58 +0000 UTC]
It's just a teaser poster I put up and for now I'm not doing the whole story, because I want to save it for a little later, but I AM doing a self-published story I will be selling later this year hopefully.
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goldenavatar [2010-09-28 00:59:34 +0000 UTC]
Is it actual night that causes the Gruxxor to change, or is it something they're exposed to on their journey to Earth that makes it possible for them to involuntarily change at night once there? I only ask because, spaceships going to and from a second moon would likely travel in the darkness of the first part of the way there and back. Even if for only for a few hours. I'd assume astronauts would figure out pretty quick if a Gruxxor had the natural pre-disposition of turning into some sort of dangerous monster along the way. And if was something that happened to Gruxxor's that traveled in space only, and it became public knowledge, would the leaders on Gruxx even want such dangerous folks returned to their Utopia?
I'm just asking, cause the plot is interesting, but it had that hole in it. And now I feel like such an ass for saying anything.
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ToxicToothpick In reply to goldenavatar [2010-09-28 01:08:53 +0000 UTC]
Don't feel like an asshole for pointing it out. Its a good point but I didn't go into detail for it because I didn't want to lay out paragraphs upon paragraphs of information in the artists comments.
The earth's atmosphere gets thinner at night, allowing certain types of radiation both from space and produced by the earth to travel farther and faster and become more potent in the air at night. Though these very low levels are harmless to us and other animals, for creatures who possibly lived in a radioactively sterile environment on Grux like the Gruxxor (thanks to a thick tightly packed atmosphere on their tiny planet) when exposed to it the radioactive particles can mess with their fragile genetic structure.
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goldenavatar In reply to ToxicToothpick [2010-09-28 04:22:35 +0000 UTC]
This radiation element could also explain why Gruxxor's are able to have children with Human's.
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ConcentrationMoon [2010-08-29 23:39:51 +0000 UTC]
bluuuhrrhhhgh you should do this
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Pandachu [2010-08-27 01:07:50 +0000 UTC]
That's amazing. I'm completely captured by the concept already. The Gruxxor look really cool, I'm excited to see then. I also love the second-moon and how it's in the first moon's shadow. The picture itself is wonderful. I lvoe the simplicity, while at the same time it has a lot of depth. Great expression of the moon's surface, I like that style. The way the Gruxxor are standing around is also intriguing. The lone-character's shadow appears much longer than the rest of them, and there seems to be mother and child, showing human-like qualities (like being bipedal). The way your name is right under earth is also boss. xD the solid black (as opposed to stars) is actually very ominous and emphasizes the moons.
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TheTacticalWolf [2010-08-26 19:33:59 +0000 UTC]
I love how this seem to work,the idea of how they turn into mutants by night yet by day they are peaceful kin.
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dr-science [2010-08-26 19:10:45 +0000 UTC]
holy shit that sounds excellent, man
why you gotta be so creative
reminds me of a stephen king story, back in the days when he was kicking ass with scifi/horror
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ToxicToothpick In reply to dr-science [2010-08-26 23:05:01 +0000 UTC]
To be compared to stephen king.
:0 my mind. ish blown.
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Jiasou [2010-08-26 05:16:59 +0000 UTC]
Awesome as usual.
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JABartist [2010-08-26 05:07:56 +0000 UTC]
dude. this. is. epic.
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ToxicToothpick In reply to JABartist [2010-08-26 05:23:36 +0000 UTC]
Haha thanks dude. Glad you dig the epic scope of it.
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Symptomz [2010-08-26 03:47:20 +0000 UTC]
BADASS BRO
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Sagalian [2010-08-26 03:42:48 +0000 UTC]
wow, the theme song matche completly with this story, or at least the picture!!
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Boshudolor [2010-08-26 03:36:49 +0000 UTC]
very cool looking man
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walkyofmilwaukee [2010-08-26 03:20:40 +0000 UTC]
I find this to be cool.
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h-z000 [2010-08-26 03:13:15 +0000 UTC]
That sounds absolutely terrifying in a very awesome and intriguing way. I'd love to hear more about this in the future, if you ever get the chance to touch on this again.
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MyNameIsMad [2010-08-26 03:13:04 +0000 UTC]
from their silhouettes i am predicting they will be adorable
I HOPE I AM RIGHT.
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Doodley [2010-08-26 03:06:48 +0000 UTC]
Go for it.
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