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Published: 2011-06-11 04:57:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 18298; Favourites: 281; Downloads: 75
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Page Number 3Caesar tries to talk some sense into Ferdel before its too late, but only succeeds in making things worse when he touches on a raw nerve that sends Ferdel over the edge. The 4th panel is a flashback shot of Ferdel's now dead wife: Urza. (The Gruxxor's immune systems don't do well with our human diseases.)
NOTE: I am aware there is a spelling error on the first panel and I intend to remedy it when I have access to a digital program again to fix it properly, but thanks for letting me know yall. THANK YOU FOR THAT DAILY DEVIATION.
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I love his eyeball. Tones on these pages are really tight too.
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Thanks a lot bro!
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(For no reason, on the third panel, Ferdel remind me Viral *shrugs*)
The comic is just amazing and we all (I hope) wait the next part <3
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I see no typo,.. but I am slightly dyslexic... lol, wow, I REALLY Like your art style. the way you draw the nose, lips and pointed chin REALLY Appeals to me, I think I want MOAR of this fabulous work my dear fellow deviant...
oh it took me awhile, but I just realized that that was his eye. I thought he had no eyes for a moment,... wow, this is really impressive. What program do you use, if you mind me asking.
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I see no typo,.. but I am slightly dyslexic... lol, wow, I REALLY Like your art style. the way you draw the nose, lips and pointed chin REALLY Appeals to me, I think I want MOAR of this fabulous work my dear fellow deviant...
oh it took me awhile, but I just realized that that was his eye. I thought he had no eyes for a moment,... wow, this is really impressive. What program do you use, if you mind me asking.
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I see no typo,.. but I am slightly dyslexic... lol, wow, I REALLY Like your art style. the way you draw the nose, lips and pointed chin REALLY Appeals to me, I think I want MOAR of this fabulous work my dear fellow deviant...
oh it took me awhile, but I just realized that that was his eye. I thought he had no eyes for a moment,... wow, this is really impressive. What program do you use, if you mind me asking.
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I use photoshop CS3 for these.
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ah i see, thats really nice C :
I'm not good at screen tones lol.
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...the "You're" got me right away without even having to read the comments about it, try to fix it soon!
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You've really improved over the years. Great job as always.
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I hope it will be in the future!
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Sometimes, greyscale is the best XD
I love the background in the second panel and their expressions are awesome XD
Great job and congrats on the DD!
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It is a sad story in a sense...
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Given that this just got DD exposure there's a good chance someone else has already pointed this out to you, but that "you're" in that very first bubble should be "your"! (Oops! 
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Actually, it's correct. "You're" is You+are. "Your" refers to something that you own.
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Actaully, I lied, I thought you were talking about the second "You're"
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Ah yes its been pointed out...but thanks! I intend to fix it when I have access to the programs to edit that.
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This shouldn't only be a daily deviation, this should be in prints and world famous ;D <3
It looks terrific <3
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I'm not sure if someone's pointed this out yet and my apologies if they have, but in the first speech bubble it should be "your" rather than "you're", because "you're" is short for "you are", and "this isn't the way to reach you are goals" doesn't make sense. ^^
Lovely art though, congrats on the DD!
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Its an error I mean to fix but right now I don't have access to a program to comfortably go in an edit that at the moment since I'm not at school anymore and back home, but I do intend to change that. Others have pointed it out but I always respect feedback like that. Thank you.
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Thanks! Its my first!
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is this comic within the same realm as step-monster?
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Nope. I draw a lot of "creatures" but none of them are within the same "universe".
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thank you for answering my curious Question.
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Think evil dude THINK... it's either an epiphany or a bullet in the brain
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Hey, did you graduate? Are you a graduate? ARE A REAL ADULT WORKING FOR REAL MONEY?!?!?!
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I DID GRADUATE. YES I AM A GRADUATE. I HAVE A DAY JOB BUT I'M WORKING ON THE ADULT WORKING FOR REAL MONEY (AT LEAST IN THE ART INDUSTRY).
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I think it adds dimension. And yes he does~!
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