Comments: 38
warman546 [2011-11-12 20:09:08 +0000 UTC]
nice it was strong
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iloverichard [2010-06-25 20:18:51 +0000 UTC]
D'aww, Jazz. We all feel it. : /
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exceedinglyspherical [2010-06-25 02:53:29 +0000 UTC]
This is probably one of the most 'thinky' Mosaic stories out there. Very nice sombre tone. Like the art style too - something different and it stands out.
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coraxonyx [2010-06-25 01:00:04 +0000 UTC]
I love the story (and the truth) here. Responsibility tends to shape us in ways we don't expect.
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Blackvegetable [2010-06-24 22:04:55 +0000 UTC]
That was pretty deep!
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MOONFIGHT [2010-06-24 21:33:07 +0000 UTC]
Wow the Styl is very cool!
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Tramp-Graphics [2010-06-24 20:13:51 +0000 UTC]
Definitely a great piece. Well done.
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Novastorm73 [2010-06-24 18:29:41 +0000 UTC]
Great piece with an outstanding final line.
Panel 3 has a small grammatical error.
"You and I have know him longer than any other Autobot."
Should be "known".
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JediFlaherty [2010-06-24 15:32:19 +0000 UTC]
Good work across the board. And set around Ironhide #1? Talk about turn-around time!
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Josh-van-Reyk In reply to JediFlaherty [2010-06-25 05:25:09 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, spot on. If you look closly, you can see Jazz walking away from Kup as Ironhide approaches him.
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Solrac333 [2010-06-24 14:52:17 +0000 UTC]
So they knew him before he was "Prime"? So are they talking about him as Orion Pax?
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nirial In reply to Solrac333 [2010-06-24 16:18:04 +0000 UTC]
That was my reaction too....
But maybe this one we should read at face value a little...
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nirial In reply to fourth-heir [2010-06-24 21:58:17 +0000 UTC]
OH!
I never got to read the IDW continuity...
I cant find anywhere online where they have it...
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Ha-HeePrime [2010-06-24 14:29:44 +0000 UTC]
Crit:
It should read, "You and I have known him longer..."
Personal preference: I'm not down with Jazz's lips. That seems a bit over the top with the "Jazz is black" thing to me. (Plus, they look weird.)
Likes:
Kup's face looks good.
Story/writing is good.
Concept is very moving.
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wordmongerer In reply to Ha-HeePrime [2010-06-25 07:49:12 +0000 UTC]
There is now a magical extra "n" where there wasn't one before...
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PurrV [2010-06-24 10:46:19 +0000 UTC]
Loosing a friend so they could make an icon....sob
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NeoNNerd08 [2010-06-24 08:11:27 +0000 UTC]
hmm that is very true kup...
anyway awesome mosaic!
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lonegamer7 [2010-06-24 07:12:12 +0000 UTC]
Poignant and so bittersweet. Sad truth.
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JZLobo [2010-06-24 05:58:17 +0000 UTC]
Jazz seems a little more eloquent than we usually see, but I guess that can be chalked up to "translation." It's a very good piece, and with a very moving final line.
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Laserbot In reply to JZLobo [2010-06-24 06:28:36 +0000 UTC]
ahh yea sad truth of it all... :/
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