HOME | DD
Trevor-Nielson — The Big Book of Body Politik pg 33
by-nc-nd
#afghanistan #army #autobio #autobiographical #ayn #blasphemy #comic #corperation #deployment #islam #military #mohammad #mohammed #muslim #objectivism #philosophy #politics #rand #reason #utah #welfare
Published: 2015-11-22 00:18:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1134; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 1
Redirect to original
Description
Page number Thirty-THREE! The Thirty-THIRD page of the Big Damn Body Politik is up and ready for your feedback! As a little background on the story. It was composed and written during my Afghanistan deployment. It was laid out and drawn when I got back home. It documents my feelings at the time as well as my opinions formed over there and the consequences afterwards. As with every Body Politik story the following is true, plus or minus the overabundance of embellishment and lies. The "radio drones" that I've played upon have never (and would never) interview me for any reason and were simply chosen to be an anonymous voice that I could prop up the story on... they do nothing but buzz about their ruler and feed it the pollen of their labor all the while expecting scraps to fall from its drooling maw!I hope you enjoy the story. I love getting feedback so please speak freely below. Unlike the aforementioned puppets, I enjoy hearing ALL feedback and I'm not in the least bit sensitive...
Trevor
The Next Big Damn Page!... The Big Book of Body Politik pg 34
Start here... Big Damn Body Politik! cover
The Big Damn Body Politik is copyright Trevor Nielson and Allienganger Verlagshaus, and may not be used without express written permission. Any similarities to any characters ,living or dead or otherwise, to actual persons are for satiric intent only and all other likenesses are purely coincidental. (Except the media prostitutes mentioned earlier) All legal questions and inquiries can be directed to Gracie the American Pitbull Terrier and she will deal with them in the usual manner! (Hey, she's my dog.) She is considering a run against Bernie Sanders and considering her financial record... I could do worse
Related content
Comments: 6
Maaan, this is so good. The layout, how clear all the emotions come through! So good, I'm a little in awe
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
well thanks! its great that someone appreciates the work. i hope you continue to enjoy the story.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
This is a fantastic layout/piece of storytelling. I'm jelly.
Also, it's nice to see a different facet of your interactions related to your service (other than the liberal cyphers).
Nice work.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
thanks, i gotta admit this story is really challenging to tell and try and keep fresh. i have tried very hard not to just bash the hive but refute their bad arguments using actual conversations and misconceptions. I've ran up against.
like i said, really challenging!
thanks for the compliments, i'll try and top it with every page!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I was gonna comment on the previous page that the character that is supposed to be you came across like a real A-hole in the interaction with the conspiracy guy, but i told myself,... wait,... let's just see how it plays out first. Glad i did. I'm liking those in the moment dialogues with radio crew showing how cartoon you is acting in the moment on page 32. Body language, gesture and facial expression tell a lot without having to resort to captions like in panel #3 on this page where it reads "I deal with frustration by over reacting, loosing my composure and acting like an ass!" while showing cartoon you yelling. While I'd prefer to have actual to and fro interaction in this page, you tied it up quite well with page 32. Well played.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Hahahaha! A-hole? well i cant say you're the first to call me that! lol!
thanks, i thought about a real dialog, but all the arguments were so petty in retrospect and i just wanted a generic depiction of how a fight felt rather than the stupid shit i actually said. (plus its been a couple of years now and i dont really remember too much about the real fights)
the radio cats are really a set of DJ's here in SLC that i would love to kick on the air. like most radio personalities they spout drivel and only support the popular opinion of the cool set here. i find them intellectually vapid and condemn them for not having any original opinions.
glad you liked the page! i'll be trying to top it soon!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0