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trplegoddess — Be Gentle
Published: 2010-08-01 18:19:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 259; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description Be gentle with where you take your heart
   For your path may not be right.
No matter what you do
   It may end in a fight.
The love, the passion
   You want to share,
Do not be frivolous
   It will always be there.
Make sure what you give
   Will be given back.
Trust in your instincts,
   Know what you lack.
It should not take a lot of effort,
   It should not take a lot of thought.
It should be like that butterfly,
   The one, in your youth, you caught.
Be gentle with where you take your heart
   For your path may not be right.
It may take another day
   To find the perfect light.
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Comments: 16

007Balel [2011-01-03 17:26:22 +0000 UTC]

This holds a really important message.
It was really sweet that you wrote this to your friend...
Although some people would just want to get hurt before they admit they were wrong..
But I love your message

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trplegoddess In reply to 007Balel [2011-01-04 03:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I agree with you. We must go through bad times to realize what good things we want and need to look for.

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007Balel In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-04 10:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Yeap your definitely right!

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Bemari [2011-01-01 17:25:25 +0000 UTC]

You have a great talent in writing. Good work!

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trplegoddess In reply to Bemari [2011-01-01 22:08:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!!

Co-Founder of

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rookyWriter [2011-01-01 15:14:01 +0000 UTC]

Great way to so him what to do.

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trplegoddess In reply to rookyWriter [2011-01-01 22:09:45 +0000 UTC]

It was great inspiration for a poem!!
Thank you!

Co-Founder of

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ilike2draw [2011-01-01 01:17:32 +0000 UTC]

I am a little jealous of your rhyming ability! Great work.

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trplegoddess In reply to ilike2draw [2011-01-01 01:36:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It just happens! I'm sure you have the same ability.

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ilike2draw In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-01 16:55:28 +0000 UTC]

It depends on when my muse wants me to. XD

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trplegoddess In reply to ilike2draw [2011-01-01 22:16:46 +0000 UTC]

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kellyrose95 [2010-12-31 21:49:31 +0000 UTC]

it's simple yet beautiful at the same time keep up the good work

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trplegoddess In reply to kellyrose95 [2010-12-31 23:43:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your comment! It's greatly appreciated!!

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kellyrose95 In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-01 20:38:33 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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MagicalJoey [2010-12-31 21:31:41 +0000 UTC]

This has such a simple, yet completely profound message. I love it.

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trplegoddess In reply to MagicalJoey [2010-12-31 21:40:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! That means a lot to me!

Co-Founder of

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