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trplegoddess — For Just One Night
Published: 2011-01-02 06:38:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 498; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Description The night we shared,
   our hearts collided.
The anticipation, of more to come,
   has me all excited.
The kisses, the caresses,
   still linger with me.
The romance of that night,
   is very precious.
The ocean breeze,
  the quiet sigh of waves breaking,
the soft kisses,
   the shock waves you were making.
If not forever,
   then for just one night.
I don't want to fall in love,
   but I just might.
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Comments: 23

TarienCole [2011-01-13 21:14:23 +0000 UTC]

Amazing imagery that shows it doesn't have to show the act to be erotic.

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trplegoddess In reply to TarienCole [2011-01-13 22:30:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! That means a lot to me.

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TarienCole In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-13 22:43:06 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure

and ohh...psst. I know you just featured me for the group, so you're under no obligation to keep this up IMHO...unless you want to be personally awesome...and I wouldn't refuse.

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trplegoddess In reply to TarienCole [2011-01-13 23:10:39 +0000 UTC]

hey.. psst.. was gonna feature in my personal journal anyway.

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TarienCole In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-13 23:12:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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trplegoddess In reply to TarienCole [2011-01-14 04:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Added. And actually, I'm the one that started this. Started mine before I posted it on the group. It's very slow.

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TarienCole In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-14 14:03:31 +0000 UTC]

oh...I thought this was a new one...wow. But then I have 4 left on mine... Though I'm about to do 1 "personal awesomeness" feature for a person who's doing something really cool for me.

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trplegoddess In reply to TarienCole [2011-01-15 01:34:39 +0000 UTC]

Very cool.
Nope, same one. Surprisingly. Hopefully more people will see it as I add to it & respond.

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TarienCole In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-15 01:39:35 +0000 UTC]

I need 3 more now.

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trplegoddess In reply to TarienCole [2011-01-15 02:21:08 +0000 UTC]

Go on with your bad self... LOL

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TarienCole In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-15 02:22:07 +0000 UTC]

You too, my friend

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trplegoddess In reply to TarienCole [2011-01-15 02:23:44 +0000 UTC]

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007Balel [2011-01-06 22:34:04 +0000 UTC]

I have to agree with *ilike2draw , you show some real astounding imagery in this piece
You describe this in a very beautiful way.

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trplegoddess In reply to 007Balel [2011-01-07 02:02:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm very glad you like it!!

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007Balel In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-07 06:43:55 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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ilike2draw [2011-01-05 04:20:24 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful. Again, I am jealous of your rhyming ability.
On a side note, a beach is very romantic, so I can see why you had good memories there.

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trplegoddess In reply to ilike2draw [2011-01-05 05:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It just happens. I've been accused of 'forced rhyme', whatever that is. I'll have to look it up.
I'm glad you like it

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ilike2draw In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-05 15:28:32 +0000 UTC]

I think forced rhyme is when you read a piece, and it doesn't "flow" right. It sounds awkward I guess.

Usually, after you read a piece you can tell if it's forced or not. With yours, I can tell that it is just your natural rhyming ability.

I did enjoy it very much.

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trplegoddess In reply to ilike2draw [2011-01-05 18:38:03 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... Thank you for that explanation.
I'm very glad you enjoy my work.

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ilike2draw In reply to trplegoddess [2011-01-05 19:38:49 +0000 UTC]

LOL. No problem

I do. I am always fond of people who can make something seem so seamless.

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trplegoddess In reply to ilike2draw [2011-01-05 20:23:41 +0000 UTC]

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Xswiffy [2011-01-05 02:36:25 +0000 UTC]

Heh, this made me smile. I like your rhyming.

This line made me laugh too the shock waves you were making, cause it's not something you normally read in a dreamy poem like this. I enjoyed it.

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trplegoddess In reply to Xswiffy [2011-01-05 03:09:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it. Thank you.

Co-Founder of

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