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Tsabo6 In reply to kemendalv [2014-07-01 13:13:22 +0000 UTC]
big thanks <3
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kemendalv In reply to Tsabo6 [2014-07-01 18:08:00 +0000 UTC]
no problem X3
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NonieR [2014-04-15 20:21:15 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Hmm. Good technique, like all your work, but this one doesn't quite come together because it seems to be two pictures--an interesting, high-contrast cityscape on the edges, and a kinda generic sf city in the background--and they don't really seem to be either unified or meaningfully contrasted.
Despite all the sight lines leading us to the central plane/ship and the city tower, my eyes keep being drawn sideways to the neon signs on the foreground sides, because the hot pinks and reds (set against contrasting black) are vividly salient compared to the muted blue/gray/gold of the center. And the details are very human; this is a larger version of cities we know.
But an outer frame doesn't often make a good picture, because it splits our attention between the edges and leaves a gap in between.
The gap is made even wider by the open space between those framing buildings and the distant tower-city, lowering the sense of either unity or meaningful contrast between foreground or background.
So this comes across as two different pictures, because we can't tell how the foreground and background are intended to go together.
I'm more interested in the foreground picture--the buildings glowing with ads, and the craft flying between them which shows us that these ads cab indeed be seen at eye level--otherwise, they'd be too small to be read from the street far below. And to sharpen up THAT picture, you'd want to pull those foreground sides in more tightly so their effect isn't diluted by the open space, the wide gold glow, or the distant abstraction of elegant towers.
The other picture here is an aircraft approaching a futuristic city tower, and for THAT picture, the vibrant neons and light/dark contrast on the edges are an unfortunate distraction. But also, well, I don't find that picture very interesting. The city tower is too far away to register as anything but generically futuristic--are we supposed to see it as glorious, or menacing, or exciting...? It's just remote and essentially static, with nothing going on but the various aircraft - one of which is in the foreground, but doesn't really convey a mood (is it attacking? coming home? seeing the Great City in awe for the first time?), so the general effect is almost as flat as a "Here's a picture of how our proposed airport would look when it's finished."
So.
I see three ways this can go. 1) You show us the crowded, vivid, human city of the foreground edges by bringing them closer together and turning the background into something less distant and abstract, or 2) you tone down the distracting frame-clutter, expand the background tower city and make it more vivid, and show us what it MEANS, or--if this crit has been making you say "But you're missing the POINT--3) do whatever it takes to make the meaning of the foreground/background contrast CLEARER.
Is it rich vs. poor? Old vs. new? Mundane daily existence vs. change and aspiration? Earthbound vs. space exploration? You're a damned good artist, so decide what you want this picture to say and make it so.
Your fan,
--Nonie
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Tsabo6 In reply to NonieR [2014-04-16 11:24:43 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the detailed comment on my first sci-fi photo bash
cheers
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AlmightyOne [2017-03-25 05:27:07 +0000 UTC]
Nice work👍🏻
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MarblesGalore [2016-04-12 01:31:35 +0000 UTC]
Can I use this for our group picture?
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delta7Xx [2016-03-09 05:10:38 +0000 UTC]
nice hornet :3
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Tsabo6 In reply to feebonacci [2015-10-20 16:25:48 +0000 UTC]
hello there, if you want to commission, feel free to send me an email or msg on rsi forums
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droppointalpha [2014-12-08 01:58:44 +0000 UTC]
Like this one and the apartment. They both take rotation as my background.
Perhaps some inspiring Cutlass art? I know all of us Cutlass pilots were stoked by the latest Letter from the Chairman and how the Cutlass is going to get another pass to resolve problems.
Cheers and nice job.
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Tsabo6 In reply to rajasegar [2014-08-26 16:36:33 +0000 UTC]
thanks
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DJP15 [2014-08-13 12:14:25 +0000 UTC]
It is VERY cool and I hope to come across your company ^^
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Tsabo6 In reply to DJP15 [2014-10-31 11:41:59 +0000 UTC]
ty
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Matsuemon [2014-07-21 23:01:22 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing!! Very very nice work
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Tsabo6 In reply to Matsuemon [2014-10-31 11:41:51 +0000 UTC]
cheers
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SnowInHades In reply to Tsabo6 [2014-10-31 14:30:27 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome
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NekoHitomixx [2014-07-20 23:46:06 +0000 UTC]
there's nothing i would change about this its absolutely perfect *-* i want to make a manga with this type of setting lol jealous of you now because i can't draw this nor do i have the patience lol and i lack this type of creativity T^T lol
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SUP-FAN [2014-07-15 00:22:05 +0000 UTC]
Kinda looks like the Walt Disney castle whenever a Disney movie starts.
That's really good.
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Tsabo6 In reply to SUP-FAN [2014-07-15 17:40:30 +0000 UTC]
hehe ty
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Yolenn [2014-07-10 23:39:50 +0000 UTC]
STARRRRRR CITIZENNNNN.
See you in the 'Verse!
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Tsabo6 In reply to Yolenn [2014-07-11 12:09:40 +0000 UTC]
yes lets fly together :3
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Angie-Pictures [2014-07-05 19:15:07 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful work! Congratulations on the DD!
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Tsabo6 In reply to C-JR [2014-07-05 14:19:11 +0000 UTC]
cheers
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KissMyWookie [2014-07-01 05:50:20 +0000 UTC]
Simply amazeballs!!! (Looking forward to Citizen as well)
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Tsabo6 In reply to KissMyWookie [2014-07-01 13:19:39 +0000 UTC]
cheers, we can fly together someday
( join ltt if you want )
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MarratoKensuto [2014-07-01 05:48:30 +0000 UTC]
Magnificent work!
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