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Vision: As a huge fan of the show and also a fellow fanfic writer, I'm immediately impressed by the style.
Originality: While I agree with gunshun101 about the small mark against originality, it also boosts its impact because it fits so seamlessly with MLP:FiM.
Technique: The style resonates the show, from coloring to appearance. I probably wouldn't question this if it actually appeared in an episode, it looks that natural.
Impact: It makes me curious about what event(s) this is for, which then draws me into each part looking for more clues. You really can't ask more from a piece of art, wonderfully done.
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Hey, thanks! I plan on doing all the chapter titles as fim-styled stained glass, unfortunately, so I canβt make up that lost star, but Iβm super-happy you think the rest of it is good!
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As a brony myself, i immediately noticed the art design similar to that of the Discord episode. That does knock off half a star for both originality and technique, however it is still does wonderfully. I didn't quite get an emotional impact other than "awesome", however the simplicity of the background with the overlay of the image does strike that feeling of happiness-in-the-dark type thingy. That also led me to believe that the story which this cover is designed for also resembles such a theme, so the vision category gets a 5. Overall, great job on creating this wonderful cover and i hope to read your story soon!
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Yeah, youβre right, I was trying to ape their stained glass design.
Also Iβm still trying to learn how to imbue my pictures with real emotion. Iβm not very intuitive when it comes to such things unfortunately.
Anyway, thanks for stopping by to let me have your thoughts! Critique from other deviants is basically 85% of the reason I bought a membership for this account in the first place.
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And that is where the magic of DeviantArt lay. Keep up the good work
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How would you feel if this actually got released as a paperback comic?
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i have no idea. who would be doing the releasing?
is this like "i pay someone 3000 dollars to do a bunch of copies and sell them at cons?"
or are we talking like hasbro comes up to me and says "YOU'RE HIRED"
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yeah, but which kind of hypothetical are we going with?
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Just if your comic got released as a paperback copy, like a IDW comic
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if hasbro decided that my comic was worth a physical release that would be really cool :] i'd want to fix up a few of the earlier pages though
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This Deviation was featured in the following Equestria Daily Post www.equestriadaily.com/2015/08β¦ Thank you for providing pony material for all of us to enjoy 
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I really have to applaud the writing of this comic, its so canon I just hear the character's voices inside my head automatically
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heheh, thanks! I was never altogether sure if character writing was one of my strong points but I guess it's another gift God's given me.
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dont have much time, but I saw the cover, dang, it looked like a movie: and this, like the cover has the mystic unknown, adventurous, yet beautiful look and feel like kingdom hearts... I'll have to read it... but hey, this is a story worth developing (I saw like pg7)
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hey cool! hope you keep enjoying it
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This is bloody amazing! I can't believe I didn't find you until now! I must watch! MUST!
Why, oh why do you inspire me to draw so much! I only have time for so many drawings per day!
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donβt we all D:
good luck, though!
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What a wonderful way to rev up anticipation.
Here's hoping both fans and non-fans alike find universal appeal in simulated stained glass.
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Stained glass is the bomb! and thanks
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Oh! This is the prologue for Friendship Update. See the book, and the shooting stars in the background?
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I do. I'm definitely intrigued by what I see.
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