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Blam0Mam [2010-05-30 02:45:29 +0000 UTC]
PWNED!
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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to Lubiniki [2010-04-11 20:20:57 +0000 UTC]
Yes, he haven't been in battle for quite a while... xD
And I somewhat enjoy hurting him... >D
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Zerna In reply to Tulpen-Teufel [2010-01-28 21:15:45 +0000 UTC]
I can understand why! xD
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spitfire-productions [2010-01-17 18:07:40 +0000 UTC]
WOW epic. That was kind of surprising. Beta indeed is awesome. I love the expression in panel 2, it's cute. <3 The last panel is epic too though. Although it's simple, but it has this awesome impact. c:
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randominuyasha [2010-01-05 06:53:45 +0000 UTC]
log 5 made me laugh haha! This is looking like an epic comic so far! X3
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DeviantIrk [2010-01-04 20:29:55 +0000 UTC]
XD The last panel is so gorgeous; it made me laugh hard!^^ *pock*
XDDD
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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to DeviantIrk [2010-01-04 20:34:38 +0000 UTC]
^^
Read my notes and comment please. It's very important to me...
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Yutaki [2010-01-04 17:57:09 +0000 UTC]
You should practice speed lines!
The speed lines in the 3rd panel aren't very good, look at some Manga you have for good speed lines and the 4th panel should have speedlines or any lines at all too, because Crudge gets kicked! That is like screams for at least some... eh what are these... You know these exclamation lines that also appear when somebody notices something? These should be between the foot and the belly!
Well whatever~~~
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Yutaki In reply to Tulpen-Teufel [2010-01-04 18:36:12 +0000 UTC]
...
Yeah, like that xDDDDD
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AgerianWriting [2010-01-04 16:49:17 +0000 UTC]
I love this page XD Beta's expression, the kick and then the log entry panel made me laugh out loud.
I can totally imagine him thinking "Cheeky punk, trying to sneak up on me..." x3
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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to AgerianWriting [2010-01-05 16:15:42 +0000 UTC]
"Cheeky punk, trying to sneak up on me..."
I can't think of anything better, so I'll use that line. I hope that's fine with you?
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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to AgerianWriting [2010-01-04 16:56:32 +0000 UTC]
^^^
Indeed xDD
I hope there'll be some more situations in which Crudge looses sight of him and get kicked or hit or whatever from behind |D
"Quit it, filth!!"
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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to AgerianWriting [2010-01-04 18:23:46 +0000 UTC]
I just had to; I am stil practicing drawing special movements such as dodging, sprinting and stuff.
xDD
Yeah, propably x3
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