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Tulpen-Teufel — Round1 Crudge Vs. Beta Pg4

Published: 2010-01-04 16:25:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1226; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 5
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Description It is really a pity.
I start liking Beta's character T_T.
But I already have exactly in mind how Crudge's going to kill him. Though that'll take him some more time...

I decided to stop trying to draw a more serious comic and add more humour to it.
Enjoy

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Beta (c)
Crudge (c) me
Irkens (c) Jhonen Vasquez

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Comments: 36

Blam0Mam [2010-05-30 02:45:29 +0000 UTC]

PWNED!

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to Blam0Mam [2010-05-30 05:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Pretty much. |D

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Lubiniki [2010-04-11 20:06:02 +0000 UTC]

This is probably one of my fav pages It made me laugh so hard! Poor Crudge being "out of practise" x3

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to Lubiniki [2010-04-11 20:20:57 +0000 UTC]

Yes, he haven't been in battle for quite a while... xD
And I somewhat enjoy hurting him... >D

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Zerna [2010-01-28 03:31:16 +0000 UTC]

.......FFFFFFFFFFFFFF last two panels seriously made me lol. XDD ha! Poor little guy! lol!

Great job on Beta.

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to Zerna [2010-01-28 06:13:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks xD I really enjoyed drawing this

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Zerna In reply to Tulpen-Teufel [2010-01-28 21:15:45 +0000 UTC]

I can understand why! xD

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spitfire-productions [2010-01-17 18:07:40 +0000 UTC]

WOW epic. That was kind of surprising. Beta indeed is awesome. I love the expression in panel 2, it's cute. <3 The last panel is epic too though. Although it's simple, but it has this awesome impact. c:

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to spitfire-productions [2010-01-17 18:15:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
I don't like Crudge anymore, I'd choose Beta over him, if I could xDDD He's really cool
The last panel of this page still is my very favourite

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SaintHeartwing [2010-01-15 19:41:03 +0000 UTC]

Newbie mistake...getting ready to gloat, or gloating over somebody even when they're not dead yet. Crudge has gotta be more careful. Still, nice use of the surprise appearance of Beta!

Good luck in Round 1!

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to SaintHeartwing [2010-01-15 20:14:04 +0000 UTC]

Yes, Crudge is way too selfconfident
Thank you for the comment

Same to you, pal

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0-Xerxes-0 [2010-01-05 19:06:52 +0000 UTC]

The zoomed-out part with the cliff and him falling down and the kicking leg is SO amazing xD "Just a little out of practice" ^^
But what I like the most is that you started with your comic so fast and with such enthusiasm...you should have seen DeviantIrk freakin' out because you did so much already

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to 0-Xerxes-0 [2010-01-05 19:24:33 +0000 UTC]

I wish I had!!!! xDDD
I do so because right now I still have the time to work on it that "exessively", because the day after tomorrow I'll have to go to school... again... T_T

I love that panel, too
This just had to be ^^^ I really enjoy humiliating my own OCs from time to time xP

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0-Xerxes-0 In reply to Tulpen-Teufel [2010-01-05 19:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Well I guess that's very good if you can laugh about your own characters being humilated. That's like laughing about yourself or laughing about your favourite part of science or your job or your life... - as long as you keep self irony you are on a very good way

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to 0-Xerxes-0 [2010-01-05 19:29:20 +0000 UTC]

Hm, true

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enigmatia [2010-01-05 08:24:27 +0000 UTC]

This gave me a good chuckle to myself He hardly tried and he got kicked off the mountain like Sparta! XD

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to enigmatia [2010-01-05 10:12:31 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking about it later, too, but I think it's fine like that
I am very happy everyone thought it was funny untill now, too.
I was a litttle unsure if anyone would share this sort of humour, I'd like to call anti-dramatic |D

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randominuyasha [2010-01-05 06:53:45 +0000 UTC]

log 5 made me laugh haha! This is looking like an epic comic so far! X3

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to randominuyasha [2010-01-05 10:13:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy it did
Thank you very much c: I'm doing my best

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DeviantIrk [2010-01-04 20:29:55 +0000 UTC]

XD The last panel is so gorgeous; it made me laugh hard!^^ *pock*
XDDD

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to DeviantIrk [2010-01-04 20:34:38 +0000 UTC]

^^
Read my notes and comment please. It's very important to me...

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Yutaki [2010-01-04 17:57:09 +0000 UTC]

You should practice speed lines!
The speed lines in the 3rd panel aren't very good, look at some Manga you have for good speed lines and the 4th panel should have speedlines or any lines at all too, because Crudge gets kicked! That is like screams for at least some... eh what are these... You know these exclamation lines that also appear when somebody notices something? These should be between the foot and the belly!
Well whatever~~~

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to Yutaki [2010-01-04 18:27:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, your right, thank you

"exclamation lines that also appear when somebody notices something"
Like the star-like thing when Crudge hit the rocks in the last panel?

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Yutaki In reply to Tulpen-Teufel [2010-01-04 18:36:12 +0000 UTC]

...
Yeah, like that xDDDDD

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to Yutaki [2010-01-04 18:53:02 +0000 UTC]

Okay ^^

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InvaderMax [2010-01-04 17:38:03 +0000 UTC]

lawlz! I love the huge difference in their fighting style.

Crudge: "I'M GUNNA GET YOU!!!"
Beta: "Meh..." *pwn*

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to InvaderMax [2010-01-04 18:25:10 +0000 UTC]

x3 Ya, me too ^^
This is gonna be fun

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yourdarlingdawn [2010-01-04 17:08:38 +0000 UTC]

lol i love it

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to yourdarlingdawn [2010-01-04 17:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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AgerianWriting [2010-01-04 16:49:17 +0000 UTC]

I love this page XD Beta's expression, the kick and then the log entry panel made me laugh out loud.
I can totally imagine him thinking "Cheeky punk, trying to sneak up on me..." x3

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to AgerianWriting [2010-01-05 16:15:42 +0000 UTC]

"Cheeky punk, trying to sneak up on me..."
I can't think of anything better, so I'll use that line. I hope that's fine with you?

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AgerianWriting In reply to Tulpen-Teufel [2010-01-05 18:27:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that's completely fine with me.

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to AgerianWriting [2010-01-05 18:29:08 +0000 UTC]

Phew, I hoped so, I did it already |D

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to AgerianWriting [2010-01-04 16:56:32 +0000 UTC]

^^^
Indeed xDD
I hope there'll be some more situations in which Crudge looses sight of him and get kicked or hit or whatever from behind |D
"Quit it, filth!!"

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AgerianWriting In reply to Tulpen-Teufel [2010-01-04 17:02:47 +0000 UTC]

You're using his stealth, I like it! That's something I haven't used in my own, since it's kinda hard to hide in the desert XD
Beta would so respond with "Nah! It's too much fun! *cheeky smirk*"

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Tulpen-Teufel In reply to AgerianWriting [2010-01-04 18:23:46 +0000 UTC]

I just had to; I am stil practicing drawing special movements such as dodging, sprinting and stuff.
xDD

Yeah, propably x3

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