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Published: 2017-06-29 07:36:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1858; Favourites: 97; Downloads: 0
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Been a while since i've uploaded, decided to do a quickyAgain I just can't get over how much I love Lars now that his personality has improved. He isn't a total 180 which I like, he still has his angst personality. He just learned to deal with it.
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This drawing is OK.
3 star on Vision because it´s OK, but not that enough for being so professional.
3 Star on originallity because it´s not original at all, we have seen this on the English Steven Universe episodes.
4 on Tecnhique because it´s OK, but not super professional, 3D, realistic, anime...
Impact... 3 star, why not?
PD: Many people still remember the moment when Lars dies ans Steven revives him. A true healer! A true hero! That was Steven since he learned to summon the healing spit from the healing tears!
Extra: My favorite character is no more and no less than... GARNET!!!
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O-0 I dont quite get why you keep throwing the word "professional" in when im not professiinal in any sort of way nor have i ever claimed to be. Im an amatuer self taught hobbyist. But nonetheless thanks for critiquing! ♡
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I rank 5 stars for vision because this minimalist gets the point through. It shows that over the years Lars changed from a jerk to a person who can handle what he is feeling. It shows that he was reluctant to help others or care but now he is different. This minimalist show the character development of Lars.
I rank 5 stars for originality. It is because this is a very good piece that describes the changing nature of Lars. It shows him angry and confused at the blue part but at the pink part it shows him well changed.
I rate 5 stars for the technique because the way you draw it simply projects the change of heart of Lars. The left shows him being angry and insecure while the right side is pink and it looks very good.
I rank 5 stars for impact because this is a very good minimalist.
Nice minimalist. Its awesome.
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Hi, StevenUniversFan !
You still need to reply me and wait for the new episode
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Can you crtitique "The Super Warriors Of Jactendo - Episode 1" here, please?
I´m not core
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How is your opinion on the first episode? If I can, I will release episode 2
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I think that it is very forced. It would be best to be more descriptive, slow, and realistic.
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I don´t know if I can get "Garno-Genet" (Garnet and Geno´s ship name) more calm or something
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I know how. Why don`t you just make them friends at first? Chill out with the shipping. I only ship characters with chemistry. Just try it out. If Geno and Garnet have no chemistry, then it is best to ship her with someone who does.
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Still, Jactendo´s rules said that Dashingos should marry with Dashingas.
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What are Dashingos? Isn`t it forced?
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In episode 2, I mention that Dashingos are Super Warriors said in other language (a language made by me named Seinama)
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So you self-inserted yourself there?
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Yes. The Jakala is me. Jactendo is the planet.
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Self-insert is a bit too cliche and it can be a lot weird. I can edit it if you like. Just tell me the main parts and the setting, I can work it out.
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Can people edit my journals? WHAT?
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No. I can just suggest stuff not really edit it.
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The Super Warriors of Jactendo should be famous!!!
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Yeah he went from most hated to pretty cool
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I think you mean dis to this XD
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Even the animation quality got better XD
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I find it funny how everyone (except for a few people like me) hated Lars then the two parter comes out and everyone is crazy over the bubblegum Cotten candy Lars
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LOL I don't really hate entirely on lars before the pink lars because its normal for boys (for me) at school
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Same at least you don't have the dabbers-_-
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