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Man this one took a while. But I'm here. Also go ahead and hit download for a legible version.

Commentary:

Frame 1: I went ahead and got the obvious joke out of the way.

Frame 2: The proper response to the obvious joke.

Frame 3: Okay...This one panel replaced like a page and a half of combat. Originally Fear was going to change into Scream, a distaff Venom from the mid 90's, and do battle with Kim. It got way too unwieldy and seemed to take the story off in a weird tangent, which given the story so far, is saying something.

So the idea is that Ron is fueling some of this comic based nonsense with his own nerdy brain. So I found a neat tidy substitute in The ultimate nullifier which is fitting since it was the human torch who had to go find the thing to use it against Galactus. I am also a nerd.

Frame 4: See, 2 panels and I'm done. Neat and easy.

Frame 5: There was dialog here, but it wasn't funny and seemed unnatural. This is better.

Frame 6+7: Another Dreamworld Rule...The guide can affect the Dreamer's dream. Another reason you want to get someone you trust doing this.

Frame 8: I think this looks neat. Just the idea of Kim letting the flames go.

Frame 9: And some naked Kim with good old fashion censor steam. Drawing nudity from the back is kinda difficult. Something about the shoulder...

Frame 10: And Kim is taking control and popping her clothes back on. Kim picked her mission outfit because it's when she's the strongest, plus it makes the transition into the next page easier.

Frame 11: And Ron's no longer just a head.

Frame 12: It looks like I forgot to finish drawing Kim again...oh well.

Frame 13: Face Punch!

Frame 14+15: I'm not sure it comes across but Kim is grabbing hold of fear, ripping her out of her little blood blob armor ...thing...and tossing her out of this nightmare and into another dream. Also that's Kim and Ron on the bed in the background...

Frame 16: Fear Kim, is regular kim with black eyes and much much paler. The idea is that she's been pushed down so long that she's gone pale.

Frame 17: Ron's version of this is probably a little dirtier.

Frame 18: And hug...awwwwww.

Frame 19: Ron insisting he's not dead, Kinda funny. Ron implying he might not be dead as if he's not sure, Very Funny.

Frame 20: Kim's hair is difficult to draw if you don't do it for a while.

Description

On to the next page: tunafrank.deviantart.com/art/Z…

Man this one took a while. But I'm here. Also go ahead and hit download for a legible version.

Commentary:

Frame 1: I went ahead and got the obvious joke out of the way.

Frame 2: The proper response to the obvious joke.

Frame 3: Okay...This one panel replaced like a page and a half of combat. Originally Fear was going to change into Scream, a distaff Venom from the mid 90's, and do battle with Kim. It got way too unwieldy and seemed to take the story off in a weird tangent, which given the story so far, is saying something.

So the idea is that Ron is fueling some of this comic based nonsense with his own nerdy brain. So I found a neat tidy substitute in The ultimate nullifier which is fitting since it was the human torch who had to go find the thing to use it against Galactus. I am also a nerd.

Frame 4: See, 2 panels and I'm done. Neat and easy.

Frame 5: There was dialog here, but it wasn't funny and seemed unnatural. This is better.

Frame 6+7: Another Dreamworld Rule...The guide can affect the Dreamer's dream. Another reason you want to get someone you trust doing this.

Frame 8: I think this looks neat. Just the idea of Kim letting the flames go.

Frame 9: And some naked Kim with good old fashion censor steam. Drawing nudity from the back is kinda difficult. Something about the shoulder...

Frame 10: And Kim is taking control and popping her clothes back on. Kim picked her mission outfit because it's when she's the strongest, plus it makes the transition into the next page easier.

Frame 11: And Ron's no longer just a head.

Frame 12: It looks like I forgot to finish drawing Kim again...oh well.

Frame 13: Face Punch!

Frame 14+15: I'm not sure it comes across but Kim is grabbing hold of fear, ripping her out of her little blood blob armor ...thing...and tossing her out of this nightmare and into another dream. Also that's Kim and Ron on the bed in the background...

Frame 16: Fear Kim, is regular kim with black eyes and much much paler. The idea is that she's been pushed down so long that she's gone pale.

Frame 17: Ron's version of this is probably a little dirtier.

Frame 18: And hug...awwwwww.

Frame 19: Ron insisting he's not dead, Kinda funny. Ron implying he might not be dead as if he's not sure, Very Funny.

Frame 20: Kim's hair is difficult to draw if you don't do it for a while.