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Frame 1: There's a reason law enforcement looks down on vigilantes. Even a well trained, closely monitored and documented policeman is capable of huge, fatal, mistakes. Take away the training and the supervision and that chance skyrockets.
Kim's good, her intentions are pure, but she's an 18 year old fighting insane people with crazy weapons. All those close calls, near misses, and nick of time rescues have to weigh on your mind a bit.
Fear may seem kind of nasty but her method's are based on what she knows. She's fear she has to be scary. It's what she is.
I don't consider Fear to be evil. She really is trying to help Kim. It's fine being a daredevil, taking risks and whatnot. Until someone gets hurt. That when you wish you listened to the little voice that said, "Hey don't fight the dude with the laser gun."

Frames 2 and 3: Here it is weighing on her mind a bit. There was a bit more before the water hits, but most I moved to the end of the page.

Frame 4: Puke! I spent more time trying to think of the perfect vomiting word bubble than actually drawing this frame. I'm still not satisfied.

The idea here is that Ron has dropped a bucket of water on kim's face in an attempt to wake her up. She nearly drowns on it.

Frame 5: Water is supposed to be gushing out of kim's mouth and eyes, it was going to be coming out of her nose too but it looked a little silly.

Frame 6+7: My first tidal wave. I still don't have the scale I wanted, The wave is supposed to be dwarfing this skyscraper. I'm almost positive I got the angle wrong too.

Frame 8: Kim getting blown backwards through her dreams. You have the Ninja and the weird Japanese head thing. Drakken's mutant octopus, the duck and cover school sign, and finally Kim herself.

Frame 9: I wanted this to look more painful. Kim is basically getting slammed against the wall by the water.
Also I forgot to make a word balloon.

Frame 10: I think Wade's boobs are bigger than Kim's.

Frame 11: Kim is a woman without fear. She pushed it down so much that when Monty made her truly scared it came back with a vengeance.

Frame 12: I like Kim's wet look here. Better than I thought it would turn out. And once again we have a good argument, Kim HAS to help people. Kim doesn't do these crazy things because she's got nothing better to do, she does them because people might die if she doesn't.
Lotta pressure for a 18 year old.

Frame 13: Ron and the bucket. Honestly the less time we look at this frame the better.

Frame 14: I like Rufus on top of Kim's head hugging her. I'm still on the fence about how expressive he should be. I did have him say Kim's name but it looks weird to have him doing people things.

Frame 15: Pee jokes! That's how I end my pages. Those blue swirls are water droplets trailing after kim as she runs to the loo. I'm going to blame my color blindess here. Because it can't fight back.

If Ron's like me, and since I'm writing this that's a good possibility, women and thier bathroom needs are better left a mystery.

I didn't know what women did really in the bathroom until I worked a couple of years at Wal-Mart and had to clean the bathrooms there. I still don't know what women do in the bathrooms but I've seen the aftermath and now I really don't want to know.

So anyhoo, next page Liz and Bonnie, Drakken and Shego, and Of course Kim and Ron, all in various stages of undress.

Yes fully clothed is a stage of undress.

Description

on to next page:tunafrank.deviantart.com/art/Z…
Commentary:

Frame 1: There's a reason law enforcement looks down on vigilantes. Even a well trained, closely monitored and documented policeman is capable of huge, fatal, mistakes. Take away the training and the supervision and that chance skyrockets.
Kim's good, her intentions are pure, but she's an 18 year old fighting insane people with crazy weapons. All those close calls, near misses, and nick of time rescues have to weigh on your mind a bit.
Fear may seem kind of nasty but her method's are based on what she knows. She's fear she has to be scary. It's what she is.
I don't consider Fear to be evil. She really is trying to help Kim. It's fine being a daredevil, taking risks and whatnot. Until someone gets hurt. That when you wish you listened to the little voice that said, "Hey don't fight the dude with the laser gun."

Frames 2 and 3: Here it is weighing on her mind a bit. There was a bit more before the water hits, but most I moved to the end of the page.

Frame 4: Puke! I spent more time trying to think of the perfect vomiting word bubble than actually drawing this frame. I'm still not satisfied.

The idea here is that Ron has dropped a bucket of water on kim's face in an attempt to wake her up. She nearly drowns on it.

Frame 5: Water is supposed to be gushing out of kim's mouth and eyes, it was going to be coming out of her nose too but it looked a little silly.

Frame 6+7: My first tidal wave. I still don't have the scale I wanted, The wave is supposed to be dwarfing this skyscraper. I'm almost positive I got the angle wrong too.

Frame 8: Kim getting blown backwards through her dreams. You have the Ninja and the weird Japanese head thing. Drakken's mutant octopus, the duck and cover school sign, and finally Kim herself.

Frame 9: I wanted this to look more painful. Kim is basically getting slammed against the wall by the water.
Also I forgot to make a word balloon.

Frame 10: I think Wade's boobs are bigger than Kim's.

Frame 11: Kim is a woman without fear. She pushed it down so much that when Monty made her truly scared it came back with a vengeance.

Frame 12: I like Kim's wet look here. Better than I thought it would turn out. And once again we have a good argument, Kim HAS to help people. Kim doesn't do these crazy things because she's got nothing better to do, she does them because people might die if she doesn't.
Lotta pressure for a 18 year old.

Frame 13: Ron and the bucket. Honestly the less time we look at this frame the better.

Frame 14: I like Rufus on top of Kim's head hugging her. I'm still on the fence about how expressive he should be. I did have him say Kim's name but it looks weird to have him doing people things.

Frame 15: Pee jokes! That's how I end my pages. Those blue swirls are water droplets trailing after kim as she runs to the loo. I'm going to blame my color blindess here. Because it can't fight back.

If Ron's like me, and since I'm writing this that's a good possibility, women and thier bathroom needs are better left a mystery.

I didn't know what women did really in the bathroom until I worked a couple of years at Wal-Mart and had to clean the bathrooms there. I still don't know what women do in the bathrooms but I've seen the aftermath and now I really don't want to know.

So anyhoo, next page Liz and Bonnie, Drakken and Shego, and Of course Kim and Ron, all in various stages of undress.

Yes fully clothed is a stage of undress.