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S3rb4n [2013-11-27 14:27:52 +0000 UTC]
Tesla Ampere? Lol, I've got a pony in my story that's called Ampera von Ohm. Funny coincidence, eh?
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kora-the-dragoness [2013-05-09 01:26:25 +0000 UTC]
This is nice, I like the little segment of the story and the stats XD Also, I'm jealous, you can make them look like they're from the show. I can't do that without making them looking fat o-o
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kora-the-dragoness In reply to Turtledude999 [2013-05-09 03:25:08 +0000 UTC]
Still looks good. And you've got a fanfic, huh? ^^ I've been trying with mine, but I'm not much a writer, and my english isn't the best XD
Interesting looking character... I like the stats, I've seen a few people do that... Maybe I should start adding it to mine o-o
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Turtledude999 In reply to kora-the-dragoness [2013-05-09 03:35:43 +0000 UTC]
Yup, link's in the description. And I managed to flunk my way though English and writing, so don't feel bad or discouraged. I've seen things that probably shouldn't have been posted without at least a pre-reader looking it over.
Find an editor or pre-reader on FimFiction. They'll help a lot with sentence structure and grammar/spelling. Here's a useful group. [link] It's where I got mine. It wasn't until about a four days after I posted that I got a reply, so don't worry if no one get's back to you right away.
And stats are your friend, too. It's how I keep most of my character's in check. For instance, Hyperion, with a luck of 1, won't play cards. Tes, however, would break every card player in the wasteland if she could. She also scores a shit ton of crits. However, she's not very perceptive and will miss a lot of things
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kora-the-dragoness In reply to Turtledude999 [2013-05-09 03:53:20 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... All my characters are different with their own advantages and flaws. It might be cool to see their stats XD
And thank you, that will be useful
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Argus456 [2013-05-06 11:03:49 +0000 UTC]
Sad Tes is sad,I kind of felt bad when Xero and her argued about his addiction. Still,I laugh whenever I remember the chapter they got drunk in.
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Argus456 In reply to Argus456 [2013-05-06 11:04:07 +0000 UTC]
Hmm,or confused ?
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Turtledude999 In reply to Argus456 [2013-05-06 15:51:16 +0000 UTC]
The question is, what is she looking at?
She kind of has this sad/wtf look, doesn't she?
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Argus456 In reply to Turtledude999 [2013-05-06 22:19:29 +0000 UTC]
Yep,so maybe first time taking a look at the wasteland prior to meeting Xero...or rather the ghouls if that part remains the same after the rewrite. After all from the drab metallic grey of the stable to the unfamiliar outside filled with some skeletons,and bam! ghouls coming at ya girl!
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