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TwilightsFall — The Other Gemini

Published: 2008-01-07 15:59:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 389; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 5
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Description On the rooftop, watching a sunset's
afterglow fade from orange to purple--
while the stars are replaced by her eyes.

She watches over me with a protected
smile, her hand wipes the tears away--
her presence within a simple breeze.

Every where I walk, she's waiting around
a corner watching my freespirited stride--
her wings keep me dry from rain or sun.

When I lay my head down to rest
her warmth glazes over my body--
keeping my dreams warm with hers.
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mixdown [2008-08-01 21:29:26 +0000 UTC]

Featured in this news article: [link]

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mixdown [2008-05-13 20:35:29 +0000 UTC]

featured : [link]

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TwilightsFall In reply to mixdown [2008-05-14 16:55:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh sweet, thanks man!

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mixdown In reply to TwilightsFall [2008-05-14 17:06:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, mate.

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Disastercake [2008-01-10 07:17:00 +0000 UTC]

That's beautiful Lee, it's great to read something from you again.

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TwilightsFall In reply to Disastercake [2008-01-12 04:24:13 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks Allie for your kind words..it's good to be back again..posting stuff.

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flame-fist [2008-01-09 03:08:35 +0000 UTC]

thats freakin ska
I didnt see anything wrong with it or that could make it better

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flame-fist In reply to flame-fist [2008-01-12 17:05:00 +0000 UTC]

it was extremely well written as always

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TwilightsFall In reply to flame-fist [2008-01-12 04:24:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Flame for your comment! Glad you liked it!

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