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Description Remember Peggy? [link]

well, if you do, you will jump n squeal in happiness as you see this Alternative Version of her fate 8D

let see if I can put this right, now...___________________
STORY TIME!!!!

So, basicly, in this version, Heinz does not think about his daughters feeling but instead is aiming all his strain on keeping her alive. He tells Perry Peggy's condition as she is still an egg and I'm pretty sure the two of them were having a dramatic conversation(fight) about what they would do.
As Doof putted all his work on Peggy's survival, he therefor quitted evil for good. But without him doing any evil, Perry had no mission there and was replaced to other places for new mission and never got the time to see his daughter grow up in a test tube
Till the year of 5, Peggy was fast asleep in her tube, then one day she opend her eyes. She learned what she could while floating around in green liquid XD Vanessa, who had finally got used to the idea of a her dad and a MALE platypus getting a baby, took partly care of her psycologicly.
They would watch movies, read book or just randomly talk for hours.
At the age of 17, her condition was finally good ehough to get out of the tube. But HOW she was WEAK DX To not being aware of gravity for 17 years and nothing REAL to eat , just some fat and vitamins and protuines through a hole into her stomach, it wouldn't be easy for her.
But she learned fast and was in a month able to walk.
She got the mind of a very polite 10 year old and didn't do much but walk around the house when there was nobody around to talk with her. She sat very often by the window, gazing out on the three-state-area, longing to get out. But "nooo~" said daddy, she wasn't strong enough to go outside yet to the big bad city~ she had to grew a little more strong and mature up 9X
Somwhere in Russia, Perry get's the message that his daughter is fully awake and out of the tube(by Karl btw, who took Monograms place when he retired^^)!!!

but can a platypus live for so long as over 20 years?
wait and se as I submit to you the short story of Perry while Peggy was 'asleep' >D

OH YEAH! forgot to tell you that Peggy also had to take a small amount of some kind of steroids to make her muscles grow a little faster, and this gave her a rather annoying headache XD
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Comments: 17

AishaPachia [2011-09-30 18:23:51 +0000 UTC]

Such a nice story... wish this was made into a full fanfic.
I would so love to read it...

And holy crap, Perry, you sneaky bastard. XDD
Laying an egg. You sly fox, I knew Doof was a genius!

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Twinkel13 In reply to AishaPachia [2011-09-30 20:38:59 +0000 UTC]

lol yeah, it would be nice^^ but I'm not a writer, really...

hehe XD hey, you've read the whole story? it's origins and the original plot line n stuff?

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AishaPachia In reply to Twinkel13 [2011-10-01 04:45:13 +0000 UTC]

Yep, every picture about Peggy and her chronicles. And also about Perry and what happened to him in the alternate version.

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Twinkel13 In reply to AishaPachia [2011-10-01 06:28:43 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it so much^^ what else do you think about it all?

do you like to write fanfics?

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AishaPachia In reply to Twinkel13 [2011-10-01 17:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Pretty neat idea with the origin of the girl and how she made it and all about that. Also the first version of her dying made me so sad I wanted to bawl my eyes out... Poor Perry the mother-platypus...
But still, I would love to read the whole story if you've ever written one. (Btw, sorry about any grammar or logical mistakes in my comments... I'm from Poland and even if I'm starting to study English in collage I think off myself as an idiot when it comes to writing. :/)

And also...
Yes, I actually love to write fanfiction.
At the moment I'm writing like... 10 stories at the same time?
But I'm probably never going to finish them... And they are such crap I think I'll never have the courage to post them online. XDDD

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Twinkel13 In reply to AishaPachia [2011-10-01 20:18:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks, it's all pretty bitter XD
n yeah, most ppl get very sad with the first version. I kept haiting myself fer making such a horrible fate for Peggy DX I guess that's why I made the laternative version about two years later^^
(you're english is just fine, bud^^ I know a girl from poland-no, I mean- she got parents from poland, but she still got an accsent... but I think that's because she's got a syndrom or something. it's not a polac accsent, she's just loud, like the green haired guy in this video [link] )

well, if you ever get the time... there is already someone who is working on a fanfic about Peggy but.. if you want to, it would be nice If you tried writing a Peggy fic X3
????????

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AishaPachia In reply to Twinkel13 [2011-10-04 13:14:53 +0000 UTC]

You're kidding me? She's talking like that boy from Yu-gi-oh?
Gosh... That's pretty annoying. XD
Anyway...
About writing the Peggy fic... I'm not sure if I would do it well... Since it's your idea. I might've screw it up or something...

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Twinkel13 In reply to AishaPachia [2011-10-04 14:23:24 +0000 UTC]

yeah, annoying... T_T

I don't really have any details, I just have a plot, and that plot is written down in seperate peices below my picures linked to her story XD
I dunno how much of a good writer you are, but I would still love to see how it would turn out if someone else wrote my plot 8D

but you don't have to if you don't want to

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AishaPachia In reply to Twinkel13 [2011-10-04 16:32:21 +0000 UTC]

I've saved both of your drabbles under the two pictures of Peggy... So... I might think it over, ok?

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Twinkel13 In reply to AishaPachia [2011-10-04 18:43:29 +0000 UTC]

there's also some info about perry for the second version
"full metal platypus" I think the name whas XD

I'm happy you do^^

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AishaPachia In reply to Twinkel13 [2011-10-04 19:24:23 +0000 UTC]

I saw that one as well. ^^

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Twinkel13 In reply to AishaPachia [2011-10-04 19:34:24 +0000 UTC]

sweet^^

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tappertip [2011-07-16 19:59:54 +0000 UTC]

yay! this doesnt make me sad!

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Aya2Michi [2011-05-23 20:07:17 +0000 UTC]

Aw so sad indeed Need more of her ! Awesome character.

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Twinkel13 In reply to Aya2Michi [2011-05-24 04:52:45 +0000 UTC]

haha^^'
glad you think that X3

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DomaYuset [2011-05-16 21:22:49 +0000 UTC]

Awuah, this is so sad... I just want to give her a big huge hug.

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Twinkel13 In reply to DomaYuset [2011-05-17 04:40:52 +0000 UTC]

sure^^ not to hard though, you might break her bones 8(

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