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BluePhoenix0702 [2017-01-19 06:26:47 +0000 UTC]

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First off, very nice coloring, especially in large sizes of artwork! Let me try to give a critique on this lovely work!

Vision: When I saw this on the first page in my feed, the colors just popped at me. Its rare to find artists who can make colors come alive and grab people instantaneously. Then again, I'm like a little kid: anything cool or pretty gets me easy. The eyes are very translucent, and make me think I'm looking at a glass with a turquoise. Very lovely indeed!

Orginality: From glancing at your works, your OC's are done well. I love how her buns remind me of ornaments n Christmas and the fact that the dress looks like a blend of a Japanese kimono waist tie and a European Victorian dress style (puffy and dark luxury colors).

Technique: Most of the work is done fine, but there are a couple if tiny things to maybe fix. For one thing, I'm an artist that draws proportions by the book, so the hands look a little small to me. Making the palm bigger can fix that problem much easier than fixing the whole hand. Some shading around the bust where the hair falls on top of it makes a 3D effect to it.

Impact: I don't know what references you used to make this, but this work is well done. Viewers who just want to appreciate something sweet simple, and serene should look at this more. (the trees are enough to make me stare at the work for a while.) e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Very well done, and hopefully the feedback helps! Happy drawing and cheers~! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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