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UltySo In reply to animelover01282004 [2016-04-10 07:45:42 +0000 UTC]
Funny thing is, I actually was very stressed out drawing it XDΒ
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animelover01282004 In reply to UltySo [2016-04-10 12:44:46 +0000 UTC]
Really? That's ironic. She looks very relaxed. *realizes that she forgot she disappeared into the abyss*
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Zitruseis [2016-04-17 20:43:44 +0000 UTC]
Hello, I'm commenting on behalf of .
Digital Art can be very hard in the beginning, but I think this looks already fairly good. I particularly love the warm colors you used, empathizing the soft, warm expression.
As a side note, I haven't played Undertale and my first assumption upon seeing this was that Frisk is a girl... until I read some other comments and googled and found out that nobody really knows their gender. So maybe you might want to try adding some androgyny? The heartshaped face and extremely large eyes add a lot to the feminine look, so maybe making the eyes a little smaller and maybe higher as well as giving the jawling more edges may help. Again, I haven't played Undertale and don't know anything about the original, so it might be intentional and in that case I take everything back.
The thing I like most about their face is their lips, by the way. I think lighting and shading here are near perfect, it makes them look so soft and cute. I also think you did well with the nose and (what many people neglect) the eyebrows, I like the detail there. However, I think the eyes could use some work. In themselves, they look fine, but I think the contrast is too hard. It would probably look better if the eyelashes were a bit brighter, maybe of a similar color like the hair, only a bit darker? Also, drawing the top part with a very soft brush may help to blend them a bit better. Also, Frisk's hair looks very nice, but I think it could use a bit more detail, since eyelashes and brows a rather detailed look. A good way to make hair look more details is to create a new layer, take a hard, smooth brush in a small size, pick some colors from the hair and then quickly draw small strands following the general direction or sometimes moving against it.
Overall, a very nice picture. Maybe not perfect, but certainly not "ugly" like your tagline states. Just keep practising digital stuff and you'll get better in no time. Good luck!
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UltySo In reply to Zitruseis [2016-04-17 20:52:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the feedback
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rainbow000pegasus [2016-04-16 15:56:19 +0000 UTC]
Hello. I'm from ProjectComment 's Weekly Commenting Project. So, I picked this one.
Anyway, I like the composition. It's smooth, and he (he?) looks to be calm (she?). Much better than my digital art when I started, so you're off to a good start! Compared to your other pictures though, this one seems to be an experimental for being a little bit to realism?
First of all, I'd like to talk about the hair. His/her (agh) hair is really soft, but compared to his soft face, his hair looks quite bright like brass or metal of some sort. The darker it gets, the less strokes used to go with the flow of his hair. Also, I'm not sure where the lighting is, and you seem to highlight many points of his hair with light. It's a little confusing when you follow the lines because they lead to form an X.
Here is a tutorial to help with the hair:
moni158.deviantart.com/art/Haiβ¦
Next, his face.
Her?
Anyway, the eyebrows are a bit too bushy-looking for one his age and his eyelashes are too thick. In addition, his lower lip seems a little "large" for his upper lip. His nose also seems to become more narrow over time as it goes downwards, and more inward as well. The colour you used to line the nose is quite visible because it's a solid colour and not really blurred (?) out like the rest.
Here are some tutorials to help out:
sangrde.deviantart.com/art/Semβ¦
40.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m4yβ¦
felicemelancholie.deviantart.cβ¦
Β felicemelancholie.deviantart.cβ¦
felicemelancholie.deviantart.cβ¦
felicemelancholie.deviantart.cβ¦
I'm afraid that's all I can say. I hope my comment helps and have a nice day.
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HoshiNoDestiny [2016-04-16 12:52:28 +0000 UTC]
Hello! I'm here for ProjectComment !
Awesome work, I really love your use of colours and how you portraied the subject, It's very pretty and well-done!
I think your style and grasp of anatomy are really good, the palette you've used is really pretty as well!
You did a really awesome work with the face and skin, it's very good! However, you could improve your coloring of hair: try to do smaller strands and add more shadows and highlights as well!
On the other hand, the sweater looks kinda blurry, some sharper shadows would be good, and also doing the lines on it less saturated, they look like they don't belong there!
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HeavenhairSixes [2016-04-11 21:40:23 +0000 UTC]
It's a lovely picture!Β Personally I like the range of colours, there is a nice mix between complementing and contrasting colours.Β Closed eyes are a problem, eyes are such a focus to pictures that when they are closed there is always a temptation to work in more detail than is needed!
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TheMysticalTaco [2016-04-10 23:47:32 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing. Beautiful. Two things! I feel like the skin tone and the background blends in just a tad too much. (IN MY OPINION If you like it then its fine.) Second, you could add darker lines right beside the lighter ones on the sweater to add more depth.
Also, remove that #ugly tag. No one will be able to find your beautiful art otherwise.Β Β
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UltySo In reply to TheMysticalTaco [2016-04-10 23:51:55 +0000 UTC]
I can always adjust it , will have to adjust lighting though for it.
Thanks for the feedback.
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new-math1z [2016-04-10 18:09:13 +0000 UTC]
Omg looks pretty x3
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UltySo In reply to new-math1z [2016-04-10 19:08:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
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new-math1z In reply to UltySo [2016-04-10 19:53:13 +0000 UTC]
welcome n.n
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God4Life [2016-04-10 16:29:53 +0000 UTC]
So beautiful...The color. Frisk's makeup the heavenly glow
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UltySo In reply to God4Life [2016-04-10 19:08:25 +0000 UTC]
Any feedback on what to fix?
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God4Life In reply to UltySo [2016-04-10 22:24:52 +0000 UTC]
It's like a BLT with bacon and Β crispy ingredients. It's perfect..........
I'm not an artist
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arodote [2016-04-10 07:49:52 +0000 UTC]
Β AAAA DDEMM EYELASHESSS aND THAT BLENDING
YOU PERFECT LITTLE GUYy right therrr
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UltySo In reply to arodote [2016-04-10 07:51:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh thanks ; u ;
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VideogameKitty99 [2016-04-10 04:58:44 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely beautiful! I think you did a fantastic job! Β
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UltySo In reply to VideogameKitty99 [2016-04-10 05:03:52 +0000 UTC]
Uhm what is it exactly that you like about it ?
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VideogameKitty99 In reply to UltySo [2016-04-10 05:07:12 +0000 UTC]
Just the soft delicate paint job! I love the feathery eyelashes~ Β
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UltySo In reply to VideogameKitty99 [2016-04-10 05:44:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ; u ; any sort of feedback for what I could improve on? I'm not quite good at digital art and wanna improve ; u ; thanks!
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