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KandyLord [2016-05-20 01:05:51 +0000 UTC]

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Oh my god, this is amazing!!! I love the 3d/realistic effect this drawings drawing has! The way that one eye is open (presumably Chara) and the other eye is behind a knife and closed with a tear(presumably Frisk). It really creates the idea that Chara and Frisk are talking to each other or standing in front of one another. The spraying blood effect is also an amazing way to show why Frisk would be upset. There's also such a perfect amount of shading and lighting. Usually there is too much or too little of one of those, but yours is pretty balanced! I just LOVE this!!!Keep up the great work!!

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oohButterfly [2016-05-19 23:44:53 +0000 UTC]

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This is an amazing piece of art,really.I have been looking for a piece of art where there was enough feeling to not fill the rest of the critique with GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT,copyed and pasted,copyed and pasted,copyed and pasted,Well you get the point.Well I'm just rambling again lets get to the art.I rated five stars for vision because;I love the way that the blood it not on the knife,but instead there's dust,now without the blood around the border,it would give quite an Impact .Now the reason I rated 2.5 stars for Originality,well the character is not original but the knife is(Sorta)It's showing who she really is.Why I rated 4 stars for Technique,The art style,I love everything,the knife,the hair,the hand,the eyes,the mouth,and the dust.The reason I rated 4.5 stars for Impact is,If gives me everything to Impact me,but it doesn't change the way I think.

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ensoul [2016-05-24 01:56:02 +0000 UTC]

Interesting portrait of Chara! Nice skin tones and also very shiny and glossy and prismatic all over, it makes a good contrast with the actual subject matter. I quite like the closed eye visible on/through the knife and creepy frown. The face overall is quite good.
I think the weakest point might just be what didn't get a lot of attention, which is the next and shoulder area. The shoulder very much fades away and isn't solid. I think with the detail on the face, hand and knife it would be good to have a more "solid" shoulder with as much detail to support the pose. The edges fade away nicely with that crazy pink gore spatter so the blurry shoulder is probably not necessary to keep attention on the knife/face.
Nice work! seriously

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Red-Rose-Ruby-Proxy [2016-05-19 15:44:05 +0000 UTC]

omg the song im playing fits so fucking well with this drawing o.o

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OfCrystalsAndArt [2016-05-19 07:37:36 +0000 UTC]

This looks amazing, I think Chara's face looks great and so are the colours in their hair! 

And since you want critiques on this I have a small one for you to consider; you used blood splatters that go very well with the drawing, but because they are mainly focused on the left, that part becomes heavier to look at. This becomes even more noticeable because their face and the knife are more on the left side and the background is lighter on the right. All this together gives the piece a bit of a unbalanced feeling to me, which makes it harder to flow through the whole piece and and focus on everything.

If you want to give a more balanced feeling to it I would suggest to re-position the bloodstains, that would probably help a lot!

I really think you did a great job on this, all the colours are vibrant and nice and it captures Chara perfectly.
Hopefully this helped in some way, I'm obviously not an expert so I hope this wasn't offensive in some way ^^" 

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MissMHC [2016-05-19 06:29:53 +0000 UTC]

Whoah great work there buddy! It's amazing!

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