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Umaken β The Parting - ch.1 p.11
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So - Jiraiya is gone.Nice day, Minato!..
By the way - who might be that person?..
And why secrecy?..
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yay! Make the next page fast! I hope we can see Tsunade-sama in the next page 8D
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Oooooooooooo secrets - we like secrets
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yessss, my prescioussss... we like sssecretsss, golm! %)
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It must be Tsunade 
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She will appear - though, not in the next page
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Not a problem
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Woo! Can't wait for Tsunade to appear here.
I love this!
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Thank you!
She will! Though, not on the next page
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The last two panels are a little iffy, but the others are great! I love Jiraiya's pose, crouched on the rail. And Minato looks good when he's bent over the rail in anger.
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Thank you!
Yes, I was in a hurry making them
Real-time things captured all my time and mind this week, and I didn't have much time for the doujinshi
I'll try to make next ones better!
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TSUNADE! WOOT WOOT!
She's gonna kick ass, I knowz it!!
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Tsunade, Tsunade! All fans are putting their hopes on you!
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Awsome!~ Tsunade's gonna come into the picture!
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Hm, the only ones I can think that will be able to beat him are Orochimaru and Tsunade. Well, any hokage also, but I think that's a given.
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The hokages, being his teacher and his student, seem to love him too much
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oh Tsunadeeee!
go beat both of them up now please ^^
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LOL %)
I LOVE your optimism! %))))
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tz Minato is to kid to him, maybe Ori or Sarutobi can stop him 
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Thank you!
You forgot about the third sannin
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ohh yeah youΒ΄re right i forgot Tsunade
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Hmmm... maybe Tsunade could stop him.
Nice page but in the panel on the bottom right, Minato's eyes look a bit off...
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You guessed right
You mean they are not focused? That was supposed to be "looking far-far-away" glance
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Jippie
Oh, for a "far-far-aways"-glance it's to focused, for a focused look it's not focused enough. xD 'Cause there are a few to less line at the evey for a focused glance. ^^
But please, please
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