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Unforgiven-Rage — Unforgiven - Squire

Published: 2009-06-28 00:50:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 574; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 14
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Description ~~Unforgiven Squire~~

The Unforgiven is a massive army that has been charged with the defence of the Terran Realm.

After the First Ragnarok War, the Commander of the Terran Forces was granted one wish from the Lord Father, Odin.

The Commander asked for a army to stand the test of time, with the duty to protect the Terran Realm, long after his death.

Odin then asked how the ranks of the army be filled. The Commander wanted the souls of slayed soliders, warriors, and knights that had committed a crime in battle, great shame or dishonour.

Odin couldn't help but ask why. the Commander simply said, "These Unforgiven warriors should have a chance to earn the right to redeem themselves, let it be in the service of defending my realm."

And with that, everytime a solider, warrior or knight that commits a crime, is shamed or dishonoured, him/ her self in battle, on the moment of their death, a Death Maiden will greet them and ask if they wish to redeem themselves.

If they agree, they will take a new oath, swearing to defend the Terran Realm and loyal to the Unforgiven; until they have earned the right to transcend to Elysian Fields.

If they don't, they will be forced into the depths of Hades...

"Unforgiven For Past Sins"
- Unforgiven motto
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Comments: 12

jessuba [2010-01-22 17:27:35 +0000 UTC]

I really like it..you have great proportions and it seems really intense. Have you ever though about putting some more middle greys in it or color or a background? I think that would make it even more interesting. Cool story line!

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Unforgiven-Rage In reply to jessuba [2010-01-22 23:24:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I wanted to creat a menacing, dominating knight; to help stike fear into the enemies morale, which I will work more into the finale design.

The reason why this just a simple black and white, is because just a beginning design, that's all.

Also, thank you, I'm glad that you like the story.

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jessuba In reply to Unforgiven-Rage [2010-01-23 21:17:11 +0000 UTC]

Oo, I see. Good luck!

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djaypanda [2010-01-22 16:05:12 +0000 UTC]

wow i love the desgin of this guy ^^

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Unforgiven-Rage In reply to djaypanda [2010-01-22 20:14:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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magnagloriousness [2009-06-28 01:01:30 +0000 UTC]

So they're basicly forced into being in The Unforgiven or else it sucks.

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Unforgiven-Rage In reply to magnagloriousness [2009-06-28 01:08:29 +0000 UTC]

Kinda seems that way, eh?

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magnagloriousness In reply to Unforgiven-Rage [2009-06-28 01:37:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. OMG!! You said 'eh'!!

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Unforgiven-Rage In reply to magnagloriousness [2009-06-28 01:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah? So? In case you haven't noticed, I say it a lot. I mean, I am Canadian, EH?

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magnagloriousness In reply to Unforgiven-Rage [2009-06-28 01:42:07 +0000 UTC]

But that's the only time you've said it to me. You say 'heh' alot though.

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Unforgiven-Rage In reply to magnagloriousness [2009-06-28 01:46:28 +0000 UTC]

I do, don't I? I use it all the time in the real world; It's more like a snort of surprised or amuzment.

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magnagloriousness In reply to Unforgiven-Rage [2009-06-28 01:47:39 +0000 UTC]

Amusement, hun.

And yeah, I figured that.

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