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Unu-Nunium — BFOI R5 - OIT021 Pt2
Published: 2011-07-14 10:17:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 3478; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 30
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- Round 5I hope everything is understandable, even without words...
Part 1: [link] Part2: You are here Part 3: [link] So here's my second part ready to throw in; whoo!
Rhea was too busy with dressing up so she totally forgot about that no talking part. Fortunately, Lane is a kind person and notices Rhea not knowing the rules (whyever that is) and gives her a second chance.
Just... how is she supposed to communicate with Charon now without any perparation? At least Blaise and Eloise doesn't seem to be all well-prepared either so Eloise ends up bombing Shadow Balls in Charon's face.
At a side note, it's a lot of fun to draw Eloise. I also think my high speed drawing abilities increase since last basecolored comic strip (which had been for last year's UBF), so yay for me, I thought I'd never improve! So I'm happy with this one, even if there are better things out there.
Gym Leader Lane's app: [link]
Also, there's an audience:
Ingzi (Rhea's got a fan!): [link]
Caro (an old friend): [link]
Vanina (Rhea's friend and supporter since UBF'10 R3): [link]
Kyle (Rhea's supporter and electronic device destructor): [link]
With Gael, that's five people, lol)
I wanted to include more but these were the easiest ones to feature who had formal wear refs... *slapped*
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So this is why you've decided to go without text!
Clever little girl, I say. ouo
Huh, look who's saying 'little'...
I'm sorry. ouo;;
Congrats on improving, too!
I guess you need skills for that... -shot-
Well, what can I say? Gotta go and read the third page now; this wordless battle looks incredibly promising. ouo
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I did not decide, it was the given challenge for this round: To tell a story without text. xD
Thanks, I was a bit nervous because it was a first but it seems like everything was understanable and easy enough to follow; yay! <3
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...oh. .3.
Well, you still executed it well. ouob
I totally didn't intend that play on words there.
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I really dig the way you do visual effects with the attacks, awesome work
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Yay, thank you! Although I guess I could have done better with the effects... but well! You always could do better, right? : D
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Aww I see. Rhea is not allowed to call out the pokemon to do any moves. So its like you have to a charades game or something XD
COME ON GARDEVOIR!! YOU CAN DO IT!!!!
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Yup, that's the theme of this round. I really think it's an interesting challenge. x3
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Really interesting indeed^ ^
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Well I had to feature Eloise's best friend somehow, don't I? 8D
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Fff >w< Eloise vs. Charon xD I actually saw it comming somehow <3
and wth? xD Ingzi camoe again? ;w; Ingzi's lucky xD seeing her idol fighting live again xD
I love how your comics looks so clean and wonderful even without shading <3
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Well, when *DIMLICHT was asking me about synching with him this round, I was like "okay" and since Blaise was using Eloise, I knew it would be cool to see a Kirlia fighting a Gardevoir. xD
Yup, another cameo. I guess she's cheering for Rhea because she's feeling bad for last round or something like that, lol.
Thank you. It's good to know it looks clean enough to count as "finished". (I am afraid to forfeit because I just basecolored and they said it's quality over quantity again. Unfortunately, I'm a quantity-type since I enjoy to tell stories above shading a never-ending amount of pictures. orz)
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Quality is important,... but sometimes storytelling can be even more important. It's hard to protray a story in one picture or a very short comic. unless it's a one-hit KO battle 8D but don't fret. I think you'll pass ^^ good story <3
Probably xD Ingzi still hopes she doesn't know it was her xD
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Exactly! That's why I decided to draw 16 pages instead of 6 or what. (Next part only needs some effects and backgrounds and it's done; I'll make it in time fffffff) >u<
I really hope so... although I think they had to kick me out for something really stupid like rejecting my kind of communication solution or because my fighting scene isn't long enough (although I think it's over 50% of the comic) or because it's not "finished" enough... I don't know, I just think it might become a close one although my fears are probably unreasoned. orz
Nope, Rhea doesn't know. And as long as noone tells her, she probably never will. xD
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yay! making it in time is WIN!
Well I hope you will pass... I want to pass to xD But I fear that my "storytelling" could be my fall here xD
I think it's good sofar So you don't have to worry.. and besides. when it's done you cn relaaaax <3
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Absolutely. xD
I don't think your storytelling was bad at all. I could follow the action quite well and that's what counts. Moreover, you colored all pages completely, so I'm positive you're going to pass, too. But then again, there were a lot of cool entries already. It's not going to be an easy decision for the judges this time, though. O:
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Everytime I see one of your comics in my deviation stacks I get excited//shot.
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