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if there's something wrong, please can you tell me? thank you...
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sorry to bother, but the line "how I come over here" should be "how I came over here" and the line "is the only thing that I remember" should be "it's the only thing that I remember"
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Why is Lionelle fighting frisk? Chara is the evil one not Frisk
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I have a different opinion about that: as player, you started the genocide, you decide what to do, so Chara is not evil, is just a consequence of your action
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I kinda have that same approach to genocide. It's the player's consequence, not Chara.
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Ok that makes sense. Just usually see chara as the evil one
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First line should be: "You're probably asking yourself how I got here?"
And I can't be sure what the rest should say until I see the next page. But it's probably either:
"I can't tell you this. After all, the only thing that I remember- is when I woke up..."
Or.
"I can tell you this. After all, the only thing that I remember from when I woke up is..."
Either way, I would suggest removing the "this" from the second sentence. It's not wrong, it just flows a little better that way.
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The exatly translation is that one for the seconds phrases...in italian vercion there is not "is...", but I can add "this" , thank you for your support
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You're welcome!! Glad I could help.
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