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I don’t think no hands by waka flocka in the background goes with the current attitude of the story lol
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That story never fails to make me cry. Asriel... You didn't deserve to die like that...
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Oof...in AfterWorld it's even worse... >^<'
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Can you link that please? I haven't heard of it, and a google search turned up nothing.
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Ooooh..uh....okay
AfterWorld Comic: Click here!
AfterWorld Group: Click here!
And just ask me if you have any questions.
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comic link isnt workinf?
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Thanks, this seems like an interesting concept.
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Now I'm imagining Toriel getting a hold of the door knob, closing the door slightly, and then dropping down on her knees with the knob still in her paw, closing the door the rest of the way.
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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EVERYONE'S CRYING! I'M CRYING!
YOU'RE CRYING! WE'RE ALL CRYING!
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Camilllllaaaaaaaaaaa- wait. Wrong person.(Great work though, you hit me with the Feels like a transport truck. Poor Tori.... And Lio....)
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FEEEEAAALLLLLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSSS
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUGGGGHHHH
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The only grammar correction I can think of to change is in panel 2: change "dumb" to "silly". There are other places to correct, but I'm not entirely sure what they should be changed into. Hope this helps at least.
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Man this AU is getting better and better! I cant wait for the next page
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Someone wants to go to munt ebott? well no problem: www.google.es/maps/place/Mount…
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Yay new chapter! And it's a feelsy one!
Aww, the poor things. Hopefully they will be able to find comfort in each other.
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And by chapter I mean panel. I can't speak lol
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I'll shatter the barrier between your comic and reality just so I can give these two a hug.
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*hugs the two poor cinamon buns
shhh it's okay, it's okay :,o
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*hugs* I shall comfort you Tori, Lionelle. *pat pat*
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