Broken-chan [2010-08-10 21:13:25 +0000 UTC]
I love this kind of composition. x3 Looks really great! Coloring is nice too, and the expressions are all quite natural. This pleases me, haha.
One thing that bothers me a bit, though (and even then it's not that bad) is Naly (... I hope I didn't get her name wrong, it's been a while since I last read A.I.L. @_@)'s left boob, looks slightly deformed to me, maybe too big if compared to the other.
...Or maybe I should stop analyzing boobs. xDDD
Overall though, it looks great, it really does. xD Feathers can be quite annoying to draw sometimes, so I see why you got lazy with them. xD I really like the rose, though
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