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Published: 2008-06-25 21:32:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 3141; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 0
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Found some lineart from last summer and decided to colour it^^ Jak's hair looks terrible, but I'm not sure how to fix that.So, it's Jak and Keira...running. I guess that's usually the result when you mess with the Krimzon Guard guys. They seem to be in a little over their heads this time, though...
I don't own Jak2 or any or the characters, blah blah blah, you know the drill ...
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Ooooh fanart, we luuurves it. Very dynamic, good poses for both of them. And I like how organic and slummy the buildings look, as well as all the numerous details you managed to convey. Like the shiny stuff on his goggle-lenses, and the cool piping. Also, even though his ears are freakishly large, you make it look ok, which is no small feat.
The only problem is the ground, really. As it is now it's...well, just a big flat space of uniform colour. I seem to remember it being very littered in the game, and in the image it looks so empty when everything else is so detailed. Just some texture or something could have helped I think.
But overall, very nice. More Jak! We demands it!
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Thanks for the high praise, you know how big a deal is for me when I finally draw some details 
You demands have been met, I've drawn more Jak here: [link]
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That's way awesome. For some reason, I can imagine an explosion in the back.
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Yeah, an explosion would look awesome! Maybe I'll change it if I ever learn how to draw that. Thank you for commenting
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Your welcome. Sorry, I just like that type of stuff. The picture conveys enough emotion without one.
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Don't apoogize, I'm not offended or anything^^ Explosions are awesome, and the colour contrast (yellow/orange VS blue) would have looked great!
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Thank you^^ And thanks for the fav! Wow, three smileys, you must really like this
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Great!
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Oh boy! I can tell Jak's in trouble... Great job!
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"Give me liberty, or give me chocolate! Lots and LOTS of chocolate!!"
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Thank you! And thanks for another favourite
He looks a bit worried, but I hope they'll be all right...Maybe I'll have to draw what happens next?
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Ooh! Yeah! Maybe they could look like they're cornered, and Jak is protecting Keira. Then the next one could be when they finally escape, but Keira got injured, so Jak is trying to find the closest hospital. DRAMA!!!
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"Give me liberty, or give me chocolate! Lots and LOTS of chocolate!!"
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Ooooh! Great ideas! I'll see if I can get started on something soon! Thank you for the ideas! Feel free to tell me if you can think of anything more like this
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I shall be sure to do that soon. But right now my brain hurts from thinking so much about my story Jak V: The Ancient City's Secrets. Let me tell you, it HURTS!!!
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"Give me liberty, or give me chocolate! Lots and LOTS of chocolate!!"
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Wow, what kind of story? Hope it doesn't hurt too much...
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It's a adventure/drama/angst(I don't know what angst is, so if you would be so kind to tell me, that would be helpful)/little romance story. If you go on my account and read the prologue and Chapter One, you'll see what I mean. If not, I hope I have some sympathy.
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"Give me liberty, or give me chocolate! Lots and LOTS of chocolate!!"
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You have my sympathy already and I've just started reading the firste chapter
Isn't angst about scared/depressed characters? "His father used to beat him as a child so now he hurts himself with razor blades and can never dare to trust or commit himself to anyone else", that kind of thing?
And BTW, I'm adding you to my friends list, hope you don't mind
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First: Thank you for your sympathy.
Second: Now I know what angst means, so yes, there is some angst.
Third: Thank you for the compliment.
And (last but not least, my favorite number! 
Do you have any suggestions for my story? Also, do you know how I can send you some of my notes without any one else reading them? I need advice.
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"Give me liberty, or give me chocolate! Lots and LOTS of chocolate!!"
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Great! New friends are always welcome^^
If you want to send me notes you we can either do that by e-mail, or by dA notes (if you look at someones userpage you can se a button or something like that for "send note to this deviant"). dA notes are better for short messages, while e-mail are better for lengthy stuff.
You're welcome to send me your notes, but I can't promise how much time I'll have to help you (even though I'd like to). I'm going to be a bit busy the next couple of weeks. But if that's ok with you, then bring on the notes
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