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RenDragonClaw [2010-01-17 00:56:05 +0000 UTC]
Now that was a neat little arc. I like how we are following Frank in the style of a journal. It keeps things practical, gets us to know and care about the essential human cast and how it interacts with the monsters, and also presents the monsters as truly some kind of force of nature that we report on and discuss but can never truly fathom.
-RenDragonClaw
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Vagrant-Verse In reply to RenDragonClaw [2010-01-19 17:11:14 +0000 UTC]
Thankya.
Yeah, when I first started it, I contemplated doing either a longer story like format of them, or give each skinwalkers individual history. But, I had neither the time to type everything out that that kind of work would require, and I saw little need to throw in some random history for characters that I'm still debating on ever bringing back.
I went with what I have now simply because the humans of importance need to have some time in the writing sun, and the skinwalkers are one of the few threats to people and kaiju alike, so it was decided to go with a journal format. It works well, and gives off the feel needed to get the story, human element, and monster element all out at once. In the end, I'm proud of myself on it.
Glad you liked them.
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Ravensaurs-Rex [2010-01-16 23:03:12 +0000 UTC]
Great googa-mooga!
Now I know what you get when you cross a wolf with a wolverine!
That thing looks just plain awesome! Again, the only downside I can see is that it's "just another form" yeah I know, I'm a picky bastard. Ignore it.
But kidding aside this is a great looking critter.
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Vagrant-Verse In reply to Ravensaurs-Rex [2010-01-19 17:05:24 +0000 UTC]
Hm, I didn't even think about wolverine traits, but looking at now, I do see it. Mostly, I wanted traits of most major forms of life in the American West. The oddly placed quills, the almost talon like hands, I even originally wanted her to have fins on the tail! But, considering the context of the desert, I saw no need for 'em.
Glad you like her.
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