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Valley-of-Fury — 10. Nightmare

Published: 2010-04-19 18:21:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1489; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 29
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Fury was making his usual daily walk around the boarders of the valley when he suddenly heard a sweet voice call his name. “Toby,” it called. Toby? Fury thought, I haven’t been called that in years. He followed the voice and on the other side of a patch of bushes was none other than his dearest Beloved! She was smiling at him so sweetly and her eyes were so calm and content (and yet distant, he thought). Fury leapt for joy and ran towards her and nuzzled her softly. Then she giggled and began to trot away. He went after her and they galloped together! Laughing and happier than ever! But all of a sudden, something yanked his head to the side, nearly making him fall. It was a halter & he was back in the warehouse! Fury panicked! Not again! He looked back at his Beloved and she too was being dragged away by a halter. He tried calling to her but it did nothing, she hung her head low to the ground and obeyed the lead. He blacked out and quickly awoke, but now he could see his Beloved on the operating table...and she…Fury had to look away, only to find that he could see his body on another operating table. His body was completely metal…not yet recovered in his skin. His chest was open and the humans were carefully placing a heart… HER heart… inside his chest! Fury screamed, but no sound came out! He felt the sting of tears in his eyes and his insides felt like they would explode. Suddenly a dark yet familiar horse with a dark red mane and tail appeared before him. “Dominic?” Fury struggled to say, and then the dark horse reared and fiercely struck at Fury with his hoof.

Fury awoke to the sound of his own agonizing scream. Shaken from his sleep and struggling to breathe, his mind was haunted by the images of The Beloved and Dominic. He suddenly felt very alone and felt a single tear escape his blue eye.

“Beloved,” He whispered, “I need you. Our heart…it hurts.”

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"Left alone with empty hands, losing you is more than I can stand, I can't mend. Close my eyes and made a wish to lose my self so I'll forget about you, Its no use."
Stray - The Exies

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Fury continues to have nightmares about his past...this one, however, seems more severe. So much so that he wakes up screaming and literally in pain! poor Fury... but i still love him.....don't worry, Fury, things will get better

COMMENTS PLEASE!!!

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Comments: 23

lucky-horses [2012-08-22 21:01:24 +0000 UTC]

i like how you wrote "our heart"!

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TheForeverPlace [2010-12-16 01:46:26 +0000 UTC]

Awwwe, Fury!

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Prettybold [2010-07-19 03:09:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. I truly started to cry when I read the last part.
"Beloved, I need you. OUR heart...it hurts."
I feels so sorry for Fury .. :< But I'm glad things will work out for him!
I love your cartoons/stories and artwork/horses.

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Valley-of-Fury In reply to Prettybold [2010-07-19 04:09:46 +0000 UTC]

aww!!! don't cry!

but i'm so glad to hear you're enjoying the stories!!! there's more to come!!!

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Prettybold In reply to Valley-of-Fury [2010-07-19 12:22:20 +0000 UTC]

I cant wait for the next chapter..

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Leap-of-Faith97 [2010-07-16 05:23:27 +0000 UTC]

wow... that line. "our heart... it hurts"... really good. I really like this!

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Valley-of-Fury In reply to Leap-of-Faith97 [2010-07-16 11:34:29 +0000 UTC]

yeah, intense line! lol i was proud of myself for that

thanks!!

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Transsylvania [2010-04-20 13:28:48 +0000 UTC]

Hm-mm, very nice!!
I like the background.
You really love horses, don't yah?

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Valley-of-Fury In reply to Transsylvania [2010-04-20 14:54:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks!
and yes i do!

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eden-paradox [2010-04-19 20:33:30 +0000 UTC]

"our heart" I didn't know you had that much creepiness in you..creeeeeeeeepy...

Dominic ...is that his horse-slave name?

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Valley-of-Fury In reply to eden-paradox [2010-04-19 20:43:40 +0000 UTC]

lol...creepy? i think it makes sense...its hers but he owns it...so its theirs....

you know who Dominic is...

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eden-paradox In reply to Valley-of-Fury [2010-04-19 20:53:08 +0000 UTC]

Yea it makes sense but it's still creepy because it's literal...ew...plus your operating scene sets the stage for creepiness you know

And yesssss I doooooo

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Valley-of-Fury In reply to eden-paradox [2010-04-19 20:54:33 +0000 UTC]

yeah the operating scene was supposed to be a little creepy...tis a nightmare!

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eden-paradox In reply to Valley-of-Fury [2010-04-19 21:02:16 +0000 UTC]

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TrottingHooves [2010-04-19 18:29:14 +0000 UTC]

This story is a very powerful and beautiful story, I really think you could become a well known author! I am definately faving this

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Valley-of-Fury In reply to TrottingHooves [2010-04-19 18:31:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!! that means alot to me!! Glad you like it!!

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TrottingHooves In reply to Valley-of-Fury [2010-04-19 18:32:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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JessieKins05 [2010-04-19 18:28:26 +0000 UTC]

this is great your story keeps getting more and more gripping im glad i choose to watch u today

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Valley-of-Fury In reply to JessieKins05 [2010-04-19 18:30:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! glad you enjoy it!!!

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emmiix3 [2010-04-19 18:25:32 +0000 UTC]

omg that literally gave me shivers [the good? kinda shivers] this is beautiful I love how you pair your art and the story together. this is so faved ~!

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Valley-of-Fury In reply to emmiix3 [2010-04-19 18:28:39 +0000 UTC]

aw thanks so much!! i really appreciate the comment and the fav!!!!

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emmiix3 In reply to Valley-of-Fury [2010-04-19 18:32:46 +0000 UTC]

you're very very welcome~!
oh just noticed >.< ~~ thank you for the sub ^_^

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Valley-of-Fury In reply to emmiix3 [2010-04-19 18:36:35 +0000 UTC]

no problem!

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