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Valvador — It's to you I'll always belong

Published: 2011-07-31 20:31:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 1790; Favourites: 81; Downloads: 14
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Description I hear the wind call your name
It calls me back home again
It sparks up the fire - a flame that still burns
Oh it's to you I'll always return

I still feel your breath on my skin
I hear your voice deep within
The sound of my lover - a feeling so strong
It's to you - I'll always belong

Now I know it's true
My every road leads to you
And in the hour of darkness darlin'
Your light gets me through

Wanna swim in your river - be warmed by your sun
Bathe in your waters - cos you are the one
I can't stand the distance - I can't dream alone
I can't wait to see you - yes I'm on my way home

Oh I hear the wind call your name
The sound that leads me home again
It sparks up the fire - a flame that still burns
Oh, it's to you - I will always return



We're married for two months

Credits:
Characters: Nayeli © =Valvador ; Rafael Rhodri © Rafix
References: [link] n [link]

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Comments: 45

ElaineSeleneStock [2011-08-11 20:09:06 +0000 UTC]

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I can tell you worked hard on what I suggested from my last critique of your work. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Well done!

The legs of these horses are much better formed / closer to true-to-life.

I'm completely happy with your addition of the second shaded area/neck muscle on each horse.

One thing that I want to mention that is just from my opinion is that you add some even darker shadows. The shadows you have are great for 3D feel but if this was mine I would add more intense areas within the already shaded parts. It could give it an even greater feeling of depth.

I think what I'm looking at suggesting for you this time is general body proportion information. I put this proportion chart up today with you in mind: [link]

Again, everything is looking very well formed.

Do you look at reference for each horse in all of your work? Don't only look at shapes while using those images, also look at what muscles you can see. Just like the addition of the neck muscle (well done there!) there are a few other lines/muscles you can add on this.
The only other thing is look at putting some defining shapes into the joint areas and the tendons in the lower legs.

Other than that I see massive progress! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Great work.

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Valvador In reply to ElaineSeleneStock [2011-08-12 10:27:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot! I will keep your instructions in mind while drawing next picture with horses. And thanks for the link!

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ElaineSeleneStock In reply to Valvador [2011-08-12 15:12:04 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome. I'm always happy to help if you have questions I can answer.

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Little-Stallion [2011-07-31 20:41:48 +0000 UTC]

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Wow Valvador I really like this!

One thing I noticed though is that the horses look a little big as in fat not that much you know and another thing is that their legs are pretty small but they arnt that small which dosn't matter...

I love the colors of their coats and the shading is good! I love the background a lot and they look like they are walking ON water, is it because the water is shallow because it looks awkward there but again thats creativity!

I love the expression on the horses face which makes me feel like they are alive XD

wellll great job! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t… " width="40" height="18" alt="" title="Tight Hug"/>

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Valvador In reply to Little-Stallion [2011-07-31 20:54:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Little-Stallion In reply to Valvador [2011-07-31 21:16:03 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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Chrissie95 [2012-02-14 18:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!

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Valvador In reply to Chrissie95 [2012-02-15 09:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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FireballStardraco [2011-08-25 21:37:34 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful work on this, this scene is truly wonderfully done.

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Valvador In reply to FireballStardraco [2011-08-26 10:55:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot

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hiena004 [2011-08-20 20:38:15 +0000 UTC]

aww, uroczo to wygląda x3 oba koniki świetne wyszły : D

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Valvador In reply to hiena004 [2011-08-21 13:06:56 +0000 UTC]

Dziękuję

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hiena004 In reply to Valvador [2011-08-21 14:26:50 +0000 UTC]

nmzc : D

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kowshe [2011-08-11 20:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Love the song, and the movie I watched Spirit like a million billion times a day when I was younger. Haha and I'd probably still watch it a million billion times a day if I could xD

I really love their expressions and the colors, but two things about it bother me. On the stallions, his face is REEEALLY dark. The eye kinda looks like its just floating there. Horses have a lot of little ridges and bumps and whatnot on the face, and when I draw I don't put them ALL, but I put a few. Maybe try that?

The second thing is, I agree with Little-Stallion's critique. The horses' legs are very, very short. I notice it especially on the stallion. Make the legs a bit longer and it'll be perfect.

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Valvador In reply to kowshe [2011-08-12 10:37:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for the comment and advice, I really appreciate it

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wildhorse027 [2011-08-11 18:33:52 +0000 UTC]

:joy:

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wildhorse027 [2011-08-11 18:33:34 +0000 UTC]

OMG LOVE THAT SOMG SSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!

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Valvador In reply to wildhorse027 [2011-08-12 10:37:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you do

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Buggie1112 [2011-08-07 11:53:25 +0000 UTC]

Love this song has to be one of the best movies ever

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Valvador In reply to Buggie1112 [2011-08-07 11:56:21 +0000 UTC]

I agree, the song is beautiful

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The-Badass-One [2011-08-05 15:11:48 +0000 UTC]

This is a beautiful picture The only thing you need to work on really is the length of the legs- they're a little too short. But other than that I love the effects on the hair and the lineart looks so smooth! I like your style of clouds as well- they look scattered and "clumpy" And the background colour scheme fits perfectly into a marshy/ swampy atmosphere. Well done!

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Valvador In reply to The-Badass-One [2011-08-05 15:14:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for the comment!

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The-Badass-One In reply to Valvador [2011-08-05 15:18:07 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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KarinaThistle [2011-08-04 12:15:20 +0000 UTC]

it is so beautiful! very love it

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Valvador In reply to KarinaThistle [2011-08-04 12:36:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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KarinaThistle In reply to Valvador [2011-08-04 13:15:15 +0000 UTC]

its my pleasure^^

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kayaczekk [2011-08-02 20:09:41 +0000 UTC]

Bryan Adams

Respekt za anatomię i bardzo podoba mi się cieniowanie

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Valvador In reply to kayaczekk [2011-08-02 20:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Z anatomią było strasznie, tyle nad tym ślęczałam, że jak już narysowałam kontury, to czułam się jak po trzech godzinach intensywnego zakuwania |D toteż cieszę się, że jest w jakimś stopniu zadowalająca

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CorusTenebrae [2011-08-02 19:48:32 +0000 UTC]

nice pracka Valv! cx i oby tak dalej XD Nie rozpuścił się jeszcze twój mąż?

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Valvador In reply to CorusTenebrae [2011-08-02 19:51:31 +0000 UTC]

Rozpuszczamy się nazwzajemnie i dobrze nam z tym

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CorusTenebrae In reply to Valvador [2011-08-02 21:50:29 +0000 UTC]

kuhuhu, to baaaardzo dobrze, to się chwali XD

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BettyFontaine [2011-08-01 19:02:35 +0000 UTC]

Uwielbiam te grzywy. :] I fajne rozpryski wody.

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Valvador In reply to BettyFontaine [2011-08-01 19:06:57 +0000 UTC]

A ja ich nie znoszę, bo strasznie dużo czasu zajmują, a są nudne ale dobrze chociaż, że się podobają

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BettyFontaine In reply to Valvador [2011-08-01 19:19:50 +0000 UTC]

Czasem warto pocierpieć dla fajnego efektu.

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TMNTChici [2011-08-01 08:32:08 +0000 UTC]

I love that song! ^^ And this is so beautiful, I love it all!

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Valvador In reply to TMNTChici [2011-08-01 19:07:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Tatzey [2011-07-31 21:39:59 +0000 UTC]

Aww, cute <3~

And the song....aww, my favourite from the Spirit soundtrack *_*

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Valvador In reply to Tatzey [2011-07-31 21:43:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I can't decide which I like the most, they are all great!

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Tatzey In reply to Valvador [2011-08-01 22:35:55 +0000 UTC]

I agree with you :3
All of the spirit songs have a important meaning - not like some movies for children nowadays, lol. oo

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dragonrace [2011-07-31 21:37:55 +0000 UTC]

aw both are really pretty!

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Valvador In reply to dragonrace [2011-07-31 21:41:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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dragonrace In reply to Valvador [2011-08-02 00:17:47 +0000 UTC]

anytime^_^

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Blood-Huntress [2011-07-31 21:36:16 +0000 UTC]

My favorite song out of Spirit. Cool.

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Valvador In reply to Blood-Huntress [2011-07-31 21:42:00 +0000 UTC]

I think they are all beautiful, Bryan did great job there! And thank you!

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Blood-Huntress In reply to Valvador [2011-07-31 22:12:41 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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