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Published: 2008-05-20 06:53:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 65795; Favourites: 414; Downloads: 483
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followup to [link]not expecially super-drawn, but whatevs, it's late.
Hector continues to get shredded behind his back, poor sap.
gonna go drink me some grease and go to sleep...
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Damn most girls are upfront with their rejections.
She does have a lovely set of coconuts though.
She's like the ultimate tomboy.
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Mmmmm grease! goes down smooth XD
I am loving the cute story you have goin' on, look forward to seein' more!
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Ooh, this brings back bad memories. I gave a girl I had a crush on a note. She gave it back to me in front of everyone in class and told me to bug (but politely, though). If there had been an ACME Portable Hole available, I would've used it.
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good question. maybe she doesn't have a stomach at all but a massive colony of symbiotic bacteria capable of digesting a variety of matter?
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makes me think he might have better luck with the gogoclone
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or at least a modicum of empathy ^^
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mawwiage...mawwiage is what bwings us together...today...
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I knew I heard something outside my window (which is amazing bacuse I'm on the 2nd floor... 
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lol ok ok...so wait...if that guy is yoooooooooou should be missing THE FRONT PART OF THE HAIR ON YER DOME AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!!! ahhhh friends.....
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truth, but it was way easier to just draw the hair as a single tone 
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well, you know what about 80% of my commissions entail, so seeing 'you' inserted into a comic is very cool... and has left me horribly jealous I don't have the skill st to do the same... using yourself as the 'dry' sidekick to GoGo's 'loud' persona, is well done.
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For some reason, this comic leaves me with one burning question: Does she wait until the grease is cooled off before she drinks it? O.O
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"burning question" indeed...i doubt it gets cooled first, the little masochist...hehe
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Van is awesome
Love her poses and expressions, really work to her advantage more than usual this time.
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Nahahah you inserted yourself!
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I demand insertion of yours truly in a Gogo-comic.
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who knows, we might find ourselves squaring off in the rumble
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I surely hope so.
Funny thing is that Van tags along with Faith, so as a matter of fact I am using you to battle against.. well... you and Gogo
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And here we see Gogo's attitude towards unemployment insurance in a nutshell. Along with courtship.
Though to be honest, Hector's not too good at the latter. XD
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this is a strange world to live in if you don't believe in working for a living, hehe
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A strange world, indeed... Living in a soft white room with nice men in suits looking after your every possible whim. XP
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it didn't take much imagination ^^ just had to feel the back of my own head and there ya go, hehe
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she is like all mid-late adolescents - displaying blatant refusal to buckle to the man, but wave something vaguely edible and you have her full attention.
this is a side to gogo i don't think we've seen before - it really rounds her out, even if it does mean crushing poor hector's confidence in the process.
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i think she has a very high degree of self-importance and vanity that doesn't jibe well with clumsy advances...hehe
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"I HAVE TO GO, LEAVE ME ALONE!"
Hahaha, even though he's got a crush on her, he still gets shit-scared and thinks she will behead him.
I think I'll crit all the comics in here. I'm all about efficiency, y'see.
Like-like: I happened to catch myself raising an eyebrow or two when I noticed how cool Andy was with Hector's crush on Gogo. However it all makes sense when you read the following comic. Of course Andy doesn't want Hector to think that he, himself might possibly have a slight crush on Gogo. That's what the reader, or at least I, assume. It's always a risk to confuse the reader like that, but the "aha"-feeling you get when you read on is well worth it.
Emotional powaz: Sucker punch indeed. The build-up is great and so is Andy's response to Gogo's devilish game. However I have some problems with the no-eyes. I know you use the no-nose a lot because it's not as important of a device to depict a character's feelings. But the lack of eyes kinda bugs me a little; I instinctively get suspicious of him. I know the eyebrows are sufficient in depicting the emotional reaction, but it still feels like he talks with his eyes closed. Okay, Immah take this to the lower levels of perception:
In panel two it works, because he's kinda looking down. Panel four also passes by without any significant reactions. Panel five is where I get a little frustrated, because he could be looking pretty much in any direction, or none at all. It becomes kinda frustrating when I have to calculate his eyes myself (this is also done instinctively, so it's only upon reflection that I notice how I actually react to the panels). Panel six is where I more or less crave to have some kind of eyes depicted. It only has to be two little dots like in panel one, that would be sufficient. Why? Because now he's angry. I know the anger is directed towards Gogo, but that's only apparent when you read the text. The brain reads faces a lot faster than it does written text so again, I have to calculate his eyes.
dis-missive: Personal cameos are always fun and it would actually be kinda interesting if you yourself had even the smallest part in the Bomango storyline. I don't have any grudges in this comic, I just flow right through it. The conversation in panel one is hilarious as well as Hector's fleeing words.
Right. So... that would probably be all from me. Which kinda turned out to be quite a lot, but what the hell, it's fun to analyze stuff that you're interest in. I always shout out a little "whieeee!" in my head whenever I see several updates in comic format from you.
Now I need to get back to work. Great job on the comics. Over 'n out.
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holy sweet buckets...
yes, "Like-Like" pretty much required a followup since on its own it wasn't very definitive.
your observations on EP's eye-thing are well-made, as i do tend to get carried away with it from time to time and many people seem to find it distracting, or at the very least curious. I'll take these things into account.
i used to be in a LOT of my comics until i realized how effin' boring i am and how much more fun it is to let other chars take the wheel (like Gogo, for example) so pretty much any role i play is gonna be fairly mute, like here. At least if it's me, there's no need to explain why Gogo knows who i am ^^
hopefully there'll be more stuff to "whieeee!" over soon, but i'm squeezing these in between "real" work and so who knows
thanks once again for the great critiques!
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Hrhr, give me a full status report!
Would of been funny to hear someone from the back yelling, "Who do you think is running this ship!!"
Nice strip! Good color work. I like the mood set in this little diner. I have to ask, how'd you color the metal parts of the stools?
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the metal parts are just a quick dash of the gradient tool
it'd be rough to hire someone who doesn't believe in work and demands free food at every turn while emptying the grease traps down their gullet when bored. i imagine the manager was bullied somewhat ^^
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XD
I'm completely baffled by that explanation...that hilarious.
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Cute and funny 
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