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Edit: changed "mrs" into "mr", thanks to ~Cup-a-Joe /Edit
Edit 2: changed strength into strenght, thanks to ~CynderSpyrolover /edit 2


POLISH:
Act II - Decyzje

Drake: Dzisiaj, jak obiecałem, potrenujemy strzelanie ogniem do celu. Złączcie się w trzyosobowe(właściwie to trzysmokowe... XD) grupy, proszę.
Drake: pamiętajcie że nie chodzi tutaj o szybkość, tylko celność. I...
Drake: ...panie Flame, naprawdę myślałeś, że Cię nie zauważę?
Flame: *ojapierdziu face*
Flame: Uh... przepraszam za spóźnienie, panie Drake... Zaspałem...
Drake: *wzdycha* w porządku. Ze względu na to że to pierwszy raz, zapomnimy o tym...
Drake: *gada* jak już mówiłem... blabla~ nie chce mi się tego tłumaczyć tak szczerze xD
Spyro: *Flame NIGDY by nie zaspał na lekcję Drake'a... coś jest nie tak.

FINALLY 8D
After more than two moths I've done next page XD; I swear I'll be now faster at them Actually, this one was odne in three days :'D (one day - lineart, one day - colouring &part of shading, third day - shading and simple BGs)
And please don't say a word about first panel XDD It was done TWO MOTHS AGO XD Thigngs changed a bit and I think I can do buildings better now - but it still don't change fact that I was too lazy to make first panel from beggining (+I know myself and this would totally ruin my inspiration ._.)

Act's name is DECISIONS - you'll know why after reading this

So, Flame overslept for mrs' Drake's lesson In comic, or at last in begin, I'd like to show you few lessons and few teachers too First one you've met was ice dragon - and he was helping dragons to pratise their observation. Second one - Drake - fire dragon, teachingaccuracy and shooting to target. He is also Flame's fav teacher (he is cool and fire dragon 8D) - that's why Spyro didn't believed Flame overslept~ Uh oh NExt teachers will be showed in next pages... or not XD It depends ~

I wanted to make Spyro's character as he had in DotD - so he is a bit boring... but hey, that's what Flame's for! 8D No, but really - Spyro won't be the coolest character of this comic, but still he'll have his moments

A lesson of shooting to targets... I wonder what will happen on this lesson >w> (except shooted targets XD)

Hope ya like it! ;D



Spyro, Flame (c) Sierra
Drake, Prince of Darkness (including story) and art (c) *Fire-Flame-Fan
Do NOT use it without permission - except for personal uses. At last give me credit!
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Comments: 84

VanillaHellen In reply to ??? [2013-04-22 19:30:05 +0000 UTC]

AW MAAAAAN

stop it

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cynder1998 [2011-11-02 20:11:37 +0000 UTC]

kurcze rób to po polsku lepiej a potem na angielski! xD

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VanillaHellen In reply to cynder1998 [2011-12-01 19:18:04 +0000 UTC]

Hah xD;
Jednak wtedy mniej osób będzie to czytać... a chodzi o przekazanie historii co nie? ;d

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cynder1998 In reply to VanillaHellen [2011-12-01 19:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Nom... a;e lepiej by było jakby było po polsku :>(nie wiem o czym piszemy bo to chyba dawno byłoooo ale chyba o język komiksu)

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VanillaHellen In reply to cynder1998 [2011-12-01 19:56:45 +0000 UTC]

Tssaaa, dawno, bo od dwóch miesięcy nie odwiedzałam DeviantArtu x'D
Ale... tak, chodziło o to , że napisałaś (-eś?) żebym robiła komiks po polsku i tłumaczyła na angielski x'D

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cynder1998 In reply to VanillaHellen [2011-12-01 20:10:47 +0000 UTC]

-aś

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VanillaHellen In reply to cynder1998 [2011-12-03 14:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Okej Teraz już zapamiętam.

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Chotara [2011-07-14 01:03:01 +0000 UTC]

*ojapierdziu face* to mnie rozwaliło. Ta mina jest genialna XD Fajny ten Drake ^^

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VanillaHellen In reply to Chotara [2011-07-16 19:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Dobra nazwa dla tego ryjka xD
Nom też go lubię

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krystaldragon96 [2011-07-08 12:01:28 +0000 UTC]

coś tu się kroi *3*

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Tiger1996 [2011-07-01 22:17:31 +0000 UTC]

polskiego proszę XD
pomogłabyś mi z tłumaczeniem mojego komiksu (jak nie chcesz to spoko C

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VanillaHellen In reply to Tiger1996 [2011-07-01 23:56:13 +0000 UTC]

ooo właśnie zapomniałam xD
Mogę pomóc 8D

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Tiger1996 In reply to VanillaHellen [2011-07-02 20:03:26 +0000 UTC]

nawet nie wiesz jak ci dziękuję
jak będziesz się nudzić to możesz się pobawić w tłumacza 21-23 strony
(21 jest zrobiona do jakiegoś momętu bo dalej nie wiedziałam jak )

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VanillaHellen In reply to Tiger1996 [2011-07-02 22:10:21 +0000 UTC]

Przyjemność po mojej stronie 8D
Jak zdążę to jeszcze dzisiaj spróbuję jedną stronkę! o3o

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masonday [2011-06-28 23:23:42 +0000 UTC]

COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Silverthehedgehog747 [2011-06-26 00:22:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow pretty epic my friend. I love Flames expression in the 7th panel!!!

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suppari [2011-06-23 12:38:29 +0000 UTC]

derp, douple comment -w- i hate my internet..
sorry ;w;

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VanillaHellen In reply to suppari [2011-06-25 21:46:01 +0000 UTC]

it's okay

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suppari [2011-06-23 12:37:51 +0000 UTC]

8TH PANEL I LOVE ITTTT IT'S AMAZING FLAME'S EXPRESSION IS SO ADORABLE X'DDD
AWESOME PAGE, I JUST LOVE EVERYTHING ON THIS C8
And that teacher draggy~ really neat desing and alll *W*
and i love Drake's expression in 2th and 6th panel X'D They're just so perfect again ôwô KEEP UP THE AWESOME EXPRESSIONSS
but why Flame was late from the lesson ;OO MYSTERIESSS That's why i cant wait to see the next pages *W*
VEERY VEERY GOOD WORK MY FRIENDLY FRIEND

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VanillaHellen In reply to suppari [2011-06-26 08:32:12 +0000 UTC]

ooooch thank you so muchhh *w*
Drake's sexy... XDD No, rly, for me he is ;

I hope I'll manage to do next pages quick X'D

Thankiez!

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suppari In reply to VanillaHellen [2011-06-27 19:14:52 +0000 UTC]

Nooo problem ;D
Hahah XD HE IS sexy 8'D
i wish i was quick too x'D
WELCOME

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VanillaHellen In reply to suppari [2011-06-30 07:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Awwies, mah sexy Draky... xDD'
|D
Oh, btw, how's your comic going?

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suppari In reply to VanillaHellen [2011-07-25 19:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Haha XD
comic...8B..well....
XDDD i've been kinda lazy at doing it, but well im alredy colouring the next page 8'B

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VanillaHellen In reply to suppari [2011-08-11 22:15:59 +0000 UTC]

LOOL I laughed at part "comic...8B..well...." XD I could almost imagine how someone is staindg in front of me saying that |D

Oooch

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suppari In reply to VanillaHellen [2011-08-15 18:17:53 +0000 UTC]

Hahahah XDDDD me too.. comic..8B WHAT comic?? xD

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VanillaHellen In reply to suppari [2011-08-16 08:35:43 +0000 UTC]

XDDD
Ya needed a while to remember you even have problem? :'D

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suppari In reply to VanillaHellen [2011-08-24 19:27:55 +0000 UTC]

Yes X'D

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Kuksi23 [2011-06-19 10:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow awsomnaśna stronka i te ich minki mnie rozwalają! O coś z nim jest... To na pewno wszystko wina galaretki owocowej! Do lochu z nią

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Nuke-annihilation2 [2011-06-18 23:17:43 +0000 UTC]

strength was correct before

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VanillaHellen In reply to Nuke-annihilation2 [2011-06-19 10:50:32 +0000 UTC]

I've searched in translator and both forms are good XDDD; oh boy...~

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Nuke-annihilation2 In reply to VanillaHellen [2011-06-19 10:52:27 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, ok. i was always taught that its spelled like strength.

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VanillaHellen In reply to Nuke-annihilation2 [2011-06-19 18:56:14 +0000 UTC]

So did I, but then someone said it's other and then you said it was good before... so I've checked XD

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Nuke-annihilation2 In reply to VanillaHellen [2011-06-19 19:00:04 +0000 UTC]

ahh, lol, ok

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Krovash [2011-06-18 13:02:59 +0000 UTC]

Noticed, that text in some portons blends with the background which "tickles the eyes". For example look at "Mr. Flame, You really thought I won't notice you?" And look at "thought" it's being crossed by the line in the background...

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VanillaHellen In reply to Krovash [2011-06-18 21:48:34 +0000 UTC]

And...?

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Krovash In reply to VanillaHellen [2011-06-18 22:01:10 +0000 UTC]

Well, i'd do chat clouds non transparent. Why? Because when you read them nothing has to interrupt you, and when it's transparent, you look at the text, but you don't completely digest what you just read. Plus it's much easier to read when the text contrasts with the chat cloud. If it's transparent, it doesnt happen. Im in no way telling you how you should do your comic, but only hint you on how to make them more comfortable to read.

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VanillaHellen In reply to Krovash [2011-06-19 10:51:30 +0000 UTC]

...I'll leave it as it is -.-

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Dragonaxxx [2011-06-18 09:54:38 +0000 UTC]

7 panel XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Ja przepraszam!~ ALE TA MINA XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDd
*dziki brecht* XD

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VanillaHellen In reply to Dragonaxxx [2011-06-18 12:15:28 +0000 UTC]

XDDD
A jak TY wygląasz przyłapana? XD

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Dragonaxxx In reply to VanillaHellen [2011-06-18 12:23:47 +0000 UTC]

Ta mina jest ŚWIETNA XD

A no.... na pewno nie mam takiej epickiej |D

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VanillaHellen In reply to Dragonaxxx [2011-06-18 21:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Hahah xD
Tylko Flame może taką mieć |D;

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Dragonaxxx In reply to VanillaHellen [2011-06-19 01:34:02 +0000 UTC]

No a jak |D

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aros093 [2011-06-18 08:10:47 +0000 UTC]

Kombinator XD
Bardzo podobają mi się pozy i te mimiki twarzy
Jestem ciekaw,co będzie następne

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DragonEpic94 [2011-06-18 05:47:25 +0000 UTC]

du dud dun

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8spyroncynder8 [2011-06-18 05:15:52 +0000 UTC]

Dun dun DUUUUNNNNN!!!!!!
Great job with the comic!

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Squidub [2011-06-18 01:52:32 +0000 UTC]

This is an epic page ;D
I love the expressions here! And chibi flame mwahh!
Awesome job

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Yorialu [2011-06-18 00:32:58 +0000 UTC]

Lol I loves your story plot!

So much better then mine

And I must say, I thought that mr. Drake was Flame for a second thar

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VanillaHellen In reply to Yorialu [2011-06-18 12:15:05 +0000 UTC]

Thankiez! 8D

No waii, your is better ;_;

Hahah XD Nooo, he is fire dragon like Flame, but he still is not Flame... but damn Drake's so sexy ;w; /shotshotshot

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Yorialu In reply to VanillaHellen [2011-06-18 20:11:04 +0000 UTC]

Naw I so like your's a lot bettah >w>;

Lol I agree with that

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Pyro2551 [2011-06-18 00:32:37 +0000 UTC]

i was like act 2 yes! nice work!

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