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Published: 2012-07-02 22:08:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 309; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Read from left to right. Please tell me know about any grammar or spelling failures you find in the text so I can correct it.One of the three huge projects of mine is about to begin for real (after two and a half year of planning and writing).
It's about time I tell you this story... The story about the world known as Delau. This is the true beginning; the beginning of Arice's story. This is "volume 1" (lol, let's call it that for now, I couldn't come up with anything better), Arice's dawn. Chapter one, Origins.
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Well who knows where it goes? (; If I know myself right I'll probably change or add a few things every now and then as I keep working with it. o; Thanks
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I think this is going to be a great comic
Can't wait for more
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Let's hope so. (; I guess that it will turn out to be another sad story though.
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This looks like it'll be awesome, I'm looking forward to more pages. c:
Just some tips; I think you'd rather write "there was peace" instead of "it was peace".
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Let's hope so. ^^
It sure sounds better with "there" now that I think about it. Too bad that it's quite late now, so I'll go ahead and change that tomorrow. (:
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No problem, do as you wish. It was just a tip. C;
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