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A commison forTinder II.Vilina:It was a Year of the Dragon 2157. and Spyro the Lightforger just became a father to a new born welps and
my mate Euralien too.He became a father of 367 welps with me and other 11 mates with whom he layed with my blessing.His most eldest favoret son Urthamiel is now 25 years old and Euralien's tenth mate Aldhiba the Beautiful,just gave birth to Ben'Jamin,Euralien's new favoret son.
One day in summer 2162.Euralien took his 5 years old son to the sea whit the intention to teach his son how to swim.When the training end,the two took a brake on top of sandhill and there they rest .
Then few minutes later,one dragoness appaered at the bottom of sandhill and got closer to them.Dragoness was young,beautiful,kind-looking and quit loveing,with purple scales that glimmered on sun.
When she got closer to Euralien she was just standing still and couriusly watched my mate.Then Euralien woked up and broked the silance with a friendly greeting.Her name was Santora and she explaind why she was disturbing them.She reveled to him that she is one of Spyro's firstborns and that she was just looking for a dragon that could be her best friend.
I met young dragoness when Euralien took her to our home Bujan and intreduced her to us.We greeted her kindly,for it was an honer to meet a daughter of the Great Purple Hero.
As Euralien and other his mates tendered Santora,I took care for Ben'Jamin who told me weird story.He told me that Santora had tried to seduce Euralien in to mating,but his father tiredly neglacded her.Well it was no suprise to me that Euralien unwantingly won a heart of another female and that,despite her age,she would probably want to be he's new mate,but I don't belive what I heared for little hatchling seemed rather upset for some unknown reason.
It was afternoon and Euralien went to the nest to mate with Vapporya,Kora and Adeliene,I went to Santora's chambers and talked with her and asked her about her intentions and what does she think of my mate.She told me what I didn't known yet and I passed all what she told me to Euralien.After mating with me,he went to her chambers and discused about her wish of becomeing his mate and he said that he's to old for young dragoness such as herself and that she should look for a younger mate with whom she'd be happy.But she suggested to let her ask her father a blessing for him for mating with her.
And of caourse Spyro and Cynder didn't agree that their young daughter should be mated with a dragon that is 56 years older then her and who is already mated with 12 dragoness's.
Mounths passed until one day,when I surched for my mate in a garden to mate with him once again,I found him sitting in a bushes with hands covering his face and shakeing in rage.I asked him what happened and he confesed to me something that shocked me and filled me with sorrow and worry.
Santora gave birth to Euralien's son.
I asked him out of shock and anger,how did that happened and when did he mate with Spyro's daughter,and he reveled to me that Santora came to us once again and insisted that they take a one trip by the beach where they could drink some good vine and then once he drinked his glass of vine,he felt into a trans and then....
The word of his son's birth was sent by her sister who noticed some similaretis on Santora's son,Santoriel, with him and immidiatly suggested a secrat meeting in Bujan.
Euralien angerly confronted Santora telling her that what she did was very unwise,not only that she commited adoultery with him, but she also brought upon herself a great truble,indicateing that once Spyro and Cynder findout that she laied with Euralien,she will be cast out and she will find no shalter in Bujan.
And she tearfuly explained herself that she laied with him only because she fell in love with Euralien,for he was a amazeing dragon that she ever seen,and also that she wanted to have a child with a hero big such as Euralien.
And so Euralien calmed down,for Kora did once a same thing so that she could have a child,so he couldn't blame her,none of us could.But the justice had to be done.
Euralien had talked with her parents and they agreed that their daughter should move and live her new life away from her parents,the only thing that he kept silent was Santora's boy whom she would soon have to raise as a mother should with some help.
Euralien bought a land in the Kingdom of Brodering,where he build a hut for Santora and Santoriel,and there she moved in.
Of course Euralien and me still visit her to see Santoriel grow into a fine young welp,even Urthamiel vowed to take good care of his halfbrother-out-of-many and to insure he grow to be a great dragon just like Spyro and Euralien togather.
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;D i had nothing better to do to rewrite the story now out of the view of Vilina xD. I just tried to discribe everything bit more fluent and smooth. Just for fun, hope you enjoy it.
Tinder II.Vilina:”It was in the Year of the Dragon 2157. Spyro the Lightforger just became the father of new born welps and my beloved mate Euralien too. He now had 367 welps with me and his other 11 dragonesses. His favourite son Urthamiel is now 25 years old. And then one day, this story happened:
My Euralien took one of the other childs, the 5 years old son Bem’Jamin, to the sea, with the intention to teach him how to swim. After the finished training both took a rest on the top of a large sandhill. Just few minutes later, an unknown dragoness suddenly appeared at it’s bottom and slowly came to them. She was young and a real beauty with her purple scales, that glimmered in the sunlight. They reminded Euralien immediately of the great hero Spyro. For a moment she stood close to my mate, watched him curious until he broke the silence with a friendly greeting.
She introduced herself as Santora, one of Spyros’s Firstborns and explained that she was looking for a dragon, who could become her friend. My mate just asked her, if she wants to accompany them back to our home Bujan. This was also the place, where I met her for the first time. It surely was an honor for all of us to meet a daughter of Spyro himself, unbelievable! But the situation should change very fast…
While all the others tendered the young girl, I took care for the exhausted Ben’Jamin, who told me a weird story as we arrived at his room. He said, that Santora tried to seduce Euralien, but he neglected her. Well honestly… it was not the first time that a dragoness was overwhelmed by his good look… but such a young girl… no, that couldn’t be the truth! I had to talk with her by myself. In the afternoon I went to her chambers and had a long talk with her about my mate and her intentions, afterwards I came to my love to tell him all. He promised me, that he would have a talk with her the next day too and I was satisfied. We had a passionate night together but somehow I couldn’t concentrate, Santoras words were burned into my mind.
As the morning sun rise Euralien held word and visited Santora again. She still had the wish to become one of his mates, but he neglected her again, with the reason that he is too old for her. A younger partner, that makes her happy, is better for her and her future. Suddenly she had another idea and wanted her parents blessing to receiving a child from my mate, but they had the same opinion than we. After this, I was so sure, that this case was cleared… how wrong I was!
Few months later I was just on my way to the garden to search for my mate, as I suddenly heard him screaming. I was worried and ran to him as fast as I could. Finally I found him sitting behind a large bush, his face covered by his hands, still shaking in wrath. I sat next to him, hugged my arm around his shoulders and asked what had happened. In a bitter voice he told me the bad news: Santora had given birth to a child and that he was the father!
I held my breath for a few seconds, suddenly felt a deep anger inside of me too. I had my difficulties not to yell at him since I thought he made his point clear. It seems, that she was able to seduce him in the end! That wicked girl! But then he told me, that it was not his fault, since he was tricked by her: Some days after she had left our home, she returned and invited Euralien for a walk at the beach. There both drank a glass of vine together and he suddenly he became very tired, when he awoke Santora was gone. It seems, that she mated with him while he was asleep and left afterwards.
I wanted to know, why they are so sure that it’s from him and he explained to me, that Santoras sister immediately recognized some similarities of him. She suggested a secret meeting here in Bujan and we accepted.
Two days later Santora arrived here again and Euralien confronted her with her foolish behavior. Not only that she used him against his will, she also brought herself into great troubles if her parents find out about it. They will ban her from their clan, but Bujan won’t become her shelter then. With tears in her eyes she explained that she did all that, because she’d fallen in love with him and wanted a child from such an heroic dragon. My mate closed his eyes and calmed down, since this happened to him before. The dragoness Kora once did it too, so he couldn’t blame Santora for it. But she still needed to be punished for her actions.
Days later he visited her parents, Spyro and Cynder and convinced them, that their daughter should finally move out to life her own life. The only thing he kept secret was her little son, Santoriel. All were relieved as both dragons agreed. And even if Euralien already told the purple dragoness ,that she will not be allowed to live in Bujan, he wanted to care for her and his child. So he bought her a part in the Kingdom of Brodering and built a home for them there.
We still visit them from time to time. In the following years her son grew into a healthy young dragon and our sweet Urthamiel vowed, that he would take good care of him to make sure that he will become a strong dragon one day, just like his father and Spyro are.
Well, that was a story… you see, our life is never boring here. So I am curious what will happen next time.”
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The story is nice but I don't think that you realy had to revel so much of the details.Sometime it is better to let viewer imagen what lies beneath the surface of the written words.
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Reveales so many details? What exactly do you mean? I tried to tell only that, what's necessary to understand it for readers. I could have written more, alot more.
Your text is really only understandable, when ppl know your characters well. I mean, it already begins at the start. Imagine, i would be completely new to your gallery, i would had a couple of questions in my mind after reading. (I know most of the answers of course, but many others might not understand what happened there)
- Who is this Vilina? And who is she talking to?
- Why does she accept, that her mate has so many other partners? Did they really had nearly 400 childs in one year and why does they need that many? (we live in a pretty monogamous world after all)
- Who are all the other names you mention here, and why do you do so, if it's not relevant for the main story?
- Why does a five years old child know about seduction?
- Do the characters do something else than mating all the time? You get the feeling that the girls are only living broodmachines.
- How does the storyteller (Vilina) react at the end of the story, why did she tell it anyway?
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You see, for somebody new it might be quiet complicated to follow it and they might get a wrong picture of your OCs. Besides it's quiet interesting to see, that you always display emotions very good in your pictures, but in this writing the characters hardly show them, and when they do, the reader sometimes don't understand why they react like that, since it's not discribed.
At least that's what i thought, of course you do not have to agree with me 
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Well you didn't had to describe of how Vilina felt when she found out that Euralien fathered Santora's child,it sounded like she is Euralien's only mate that he has.
-Euralien didn't got 367 welps in one year but in 25 years,for Euralien mate with dragoness rarely.
-5 year child couldn't know how to describe the word seduction,I just wrote that as how did Vilina understood the stinting discribetions from her young stepson.
-And Dragons are,in my thought,poligamysts,they prefer that one male dragon or one female have more then one mate,just like their very first patriarch Falkor did when he leid with first seven females in the past.The reason for this is because of the great natality of female population in Dragon realms.So because of the small male population,dragoness's are forced to lay with one single mate in hope to increase the popularity of males,but ironcly it just enlarges more the female population.
I kept this information for the comic but considering that viewers,inclueding you,are maybe wondering why one male has so many females,I just had to reluctantly give up this secret.
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Ah so that's all about 
- Oh allright^^ but you didn't mentioned that there. It's like you put informations in there, that the reader can't know. It would be the same if i would ask you btw... How many kids does Synastra have? or How old is Relan?, Things i never mentioned so far.
By the way how do they feed all those kids and how many eggs does a dragoness give birth to in one year? He mates rarely with them?! It seems in this discription, that he does nothing else
- Ok so that was it all about, i was just a bit confused.
- I know, you mentioned that before, that they are all polygamous. I meant in our real world it is the normal case that a person has only one partner at time. I also wouldn't want to have a man who has more girls beside me. But fantasy creatures are fantasy so they can be whatever the creator wants them to be.
Ah so a lack of guys then? Well too bad xD How do they avoid incest?
Sorry for annoying you with my questions it just seems that everytime you answer me, i get more curious and it leads to new questions
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I see that you like the story I wrote,don't you?
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Yes it was nice to read, at some parts a bit difficult to follow through xD.
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When the time come I'll note you a story about Euralien and your OC's for DC comic so that you may know how I intend to set the next chapters of my comic.
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Sounds good :3 i am alredy curious how you will portray my OCs since i also have really less information given about many of them.
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Wow.That is quit a comment.
And I see that you told the story in Vilina's point of view very good.
You depiced my character as if it is your own.Well done.
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Yes be lucky xD normally i never write that much. I just was in mood for a bit of writing, you see, i'm a little writing amateur and write for myself from time to time, mainly stuff about my own OCs.
But i'm glad that you like it, at first i was not sure, if i caught her personality right, so i tried to keep her opinion about the actions quiet neutral, since that's how i saw her from your discriptions.
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Don't you want to favorize it?
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And you have my own dramatic version for your comic about Santora.
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My dragons are quite the polygamist are they now, 11 mates yikes. 1 mate for life is enough for me at least as I see it LoL. I do think that us such a cute baby red dragon there as I see it and, the beach again is also so fitting as well in my mind. I like the design details and the little story that this image has in it and the what the colors reflect as such also, well done.
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Well Euralien has 12 mates;Tinder II.Vilina,Aurora the Blueyed,Vapporya Bizerna,Krystalia the Nicescale,Miranda the Goldenwing,Efnetruma and Adelien(Firehammers sisters),Koleda the Fireskular and Aldhiba the Beautiful(daughters of Dragon knight),Hehteorla the Goldenhair and Gesellana the Ironscales.I'll publish their referances when I make them.
But thanks any way.
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See and like I said too many, a lovely image it is though.
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