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Lekitzul [2011-06-26 13:33:24 +0000 UTC]
I dont know whats better, the picture or the story. Great job!
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Runningstream [2009-04-23 11:00:00 +0000 UTC]
Awesome story!^^
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Mare-Of-The-Sea [2009-01-05 04:46:35 +0000 UTC]
I remember reading this a long time ago, back when I didn't like the Shichinintai that much and before I even thought of having a DA account. This fanfiction was the sole reason I became fond of the Shichinintai and inspired me to work on a fanfiction I'm currently working on and revising.
My version of the Shichinintai's death is a bit different then this one, but your's is nice to read.
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EmeraldAlyce [2008-07-26 20:55:23 +0000 UTC]
I love it and I been searching forever to find something like what you wrote!
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DarianeHitwari [2007-10-25 02:08:35 +0000 UTC]
That seems accrurate enough to what they may have been thinking. Which did give me an idea for my story. ^^ In my own, it won't happen like this but possibly a little bit similar.
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Harmony21210 [2007-09-30 17:33:26 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's so sad!!!!!!!That should have been in the show!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ensatsu-Kokuryu [2007-06-28 14:20:50 +0000 UTC]
Both the story and the image are beautiful and complement each other well. The picture in particular really captures the emotion of the story.
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SepherothsXLover [2006-12-23 04:57:03 +0000 UTC]
Wow. How do you know what to write for the picture? Awesome.
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VegaSailor In reply to SepherothsXLover [2006-12-23 19:57:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Well the story and the picture sort of inspired each other. :Aww:
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Metal-Assassin [2006-08-30 03:39:01 +0000 UTC]
i love the whole idea of this pic! there r simply no words to discribe this beautiful pic! u captured it perfectly! i love it! great job!!!
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Urd-chan [2006-08-16 20:25:24 +0000 UTC]
Love the art and the story with it. Of course, this is the ONE yaoi pairing from Inuyasha I am totally addicted to.
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CannibalNarcissistic [2006-08-12 20:39:55 +0000 UTC]
THAT WAS SO SAD!!!!!!!!!!! But I LOVE IT!!!! LOVE the PIC TO!!! Great job!!!
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MissMicike [2006-08-05 13:03:08 +0000 UTC]
I'm going to cry...
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MissMicike In reply to VegaSailor [2006-08-06 15:11:54 +0000 UTC]
I loooved it To the deepest corner of my heart! But I can't help it, after reading about their death, or seeing the anime again... I can't bear seeing them dying again, and again!
*cough* By the way, I'm into normal again, so I'm going to tell you how I liked the imagination (if it was an imagination in fact) Jakotsu had with Bankotsu. And Suikotsu's multiple personality, the arguement. And, and Renkotsu's final words!
When Bankotsu said his final words I was really scared, I felt like he is going to kill me too *shivers*
By the way I've always imagined thjeir death this way, Bankotsu being the last one ^^
Thank you for sharing!
(I printed this and I'm keeping it beside my bed, if you don't mind) (Sorry for being an obsessed freak... )
And sorry for the long ocmment
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Empatheia [2006-08-03 19:30:43 +0000 UTC]
*silence*
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Did you know that this piece is your best by at least 247%? It's in a league of its own. I almost didn't recognize it as you, but then it clicked. This is your real talent. I knew you had it in you. *love*
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Linkatrix [2006-08-03 16:39:14 +0000 UTC]
luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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InuYashaSesshomaru [2006-08-03 02:22:27 +0000 UTC]
WOW
I like the pic... great job with the emotion, but I loved the story more.
In my opinion, I would think that with their murdering ways, the Schinintai would not be capable of love. But, maybe they could love one another. So, maybe you've stumbled on something. Great, GREAT job....
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InuYashaSesshomaru In reply to VegaSailor [2006-08-03 08:00:56 +0000 UTC]
NO problem! I love your writing, it's so different from other people's writing. One day, perhaps, I'll be able to come up with a more original story a la fan fic. Just keep up the great stories!
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InuYashaSesshomaru In reply to VegaSailor [2006-08-09 00:48:30 +0000 UTC]
Really? That's weird.. I just saw Resurrection the other day... o_O I like some sci-fi, especially if it's horror, like Event Horizon. That movie still scares the bejesus out of me. But I don't really watch stuff like Star Trek. But I did love Star Wars! XD
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Caitriona695 [2006-08-02 23:41:14 +0000 UTC]
I forgot to mention that I absolutely loved the picture you drew. I'll fav it for that alone!
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Caitriona695 [2006-08-02 23:39:57 +0000 UTC]
WOW! This was a powerful piece and I really liked it a lot. I love how you gave each member's feelings about not only the rain but also about Bankotsu. (but more the rain than ban)
I love Jakotsu and his death, especially after that final kiss made me a little sad. Bank's curse at the end was funny in a way - because I knew that he did come back and destroyed their settlement.
Although it is snow not rain, this deviation [link] immediately came to mind as I was reading this.
Thanks for sharing!
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VegaSailor In reply to Caitriona695 [2006-08-03 01:09:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! Yeah I think Jak's death is my favorite bit too, it just flowed from my brain effortlessly.
The rain and snow and the opera lyrics bound everything together, a common subject that each of the characters related to in their own way. Ren found it an annoyance, Sui thought it was a blessing, and Jak was more focused on his love/fantasy of Ban that he didn't notice the rain.
I know, remember it started snowing after Jak's death. So it was snowing when Ban was killed. weather can change on a dime. It happens all the time in Seattle in winter. It'll be raining one minute, snowing the next, then go back to rain again. The rain was sort of a metaphoric meaning for each member. Snow is white the color of purity, when Jakotsu finally expressed the depths of his love, that was something pure, and so the snow came.
BTW, that picture you gave me the link to so beautiful, that is just how I pictured Ban's death too, with the snow falling.
Thank you so much for your wonderful review!
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Wynterstoops [2006-08-02 23:34:00 +0000 UTC]
It makes me sad but I do believe this is one of your best pieces yet. The prose was excellent...
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kirayasha [2006-08-02 23:31:29 +0000 UTC]
Beautifully done! Not only do I love this story, but this is a beautiful pic to go with it! You did a great job on the kiss! (I find them to be hard to draw!)
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kirayasha In reply to VegaSailor [2006-08-03 01:36:33 +0000 UTC]
I know!! And you did awesome here!
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