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Published: 2010-01-11 18:43:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 1705; Favourites: 91; Downloads: 53
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Edit:I re-drew some lines that was looking messyD:awwwww
You know,the moment I saw this chara I fell in love.I really,REALLY loved the Peacock and her Falala,and i wanted to draw it;o; but since I suck at drawing animals,I just made FalalaXDDD
Not much to say,just that I like the result and I may color it in the future.Maybe.
Lady Falala belongs to ,and this is a little gift for her;o; gogogo and give her some love!!
Took around 6 hours to draw itXDDD but it was soo nice;o;
Based on this pic: awesome,huh? 
Love ya!;o;
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Comments: 47
Devious Rating: 4/5
Impact: 4/5
Originality: 3/5
Vision: 4/5
Technique: 4.5/5
Now, one of the reasons I marked you down is mainly because of Falala's legs. As I've noticed with many of your works, your upper legs are frequently too short. In this picture, you arms are a bit too short too. Her chest is also a bt misplaced (excuse me), and the folds on her shirt are a bit...too controlled to seem natural. I don't recommend drawing the same type of fold throughout. You should start some folds on the other side too.
I marked you down for originality, but that's because 1) it's someone else's OC and 2)You seem to draw this pose frequently.
After the negative, I'll give you the positive. First: the lighting.
You didn't do the "one corner light, one corner dark" way. The way you shown light in those rays is of great technique.
Second: the dress. It's extremely intricate, and clean too. Same for all the jewelry and other little embellishments.
Third: peacock references were subtle. You used the dress, and the portrait in the background. This makes it a huge hint that this is the Peacock Lady, but it doesn't smack you right in the face.
Your hair is as good as usual.
PS Did you scan it, or did you take a picture?
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Thank you so much for the critique!
I scanned it.
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So very lovely! (That sounds weird... hmmmm... nope, too lazy to change it!) I love the details!
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I tried to give a comment so many time on this! bad internet connectionTT_TT
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS PICCCCCCCCCCCCCCC AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW LADYFALALA LOOKS SO PRETTY IN YOUR STYLE!
such a gorgeous details! Those are better than my version! kyaaaaa >_<
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so is mine hereT.T
awwwwwwwwwww<3333333333 you're welcome,dearest! you know,I just wanted to give a little gift to youand say how much I luv u<333 
XD I love details<3 they always make the work look prettier*pokes hellobaby*
no it's notXD your is colored and,besides,it's your character
awww don't worry,I'm happeh you like!<3333
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=w= you welcome,sweetiest
*eats
hey,do you wanna be part of my family?=u=
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ohh i think you're making real improvements <3 this is really detailed and pretty, the concept is lovely
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<3 me is happeh you think this way,lol
hehe yeah,I likedetailed stuff<3333 and thank you so muchfor the compliments,they REALLy mean a lot to me,girl
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<3 thank you dear!
and you're welcome<3333
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How are you?, I really haven't had the chance to talk for a while
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yeah I know:C and besides,what's worse is that my sub is running out and I can't buy it...and all these time as a subscriber I wasn't able to enter much on DA;A;
anyways,as soon as i'm there I will be on DA 25 hours a day,so I will talk to you muuuch more oftenXDD
and take a look at your gallery...haven't been able to see it for AGES,I feel soo bad
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It's ok, have a great time at your dads and well talk soon
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yay!!
but say,what's up to you recently?
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Doing good, making new art, hats and helping needy people, lol
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yay!!!!!!!
haha you're awesome,Rob>3<
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